Is it just me or does this chapter make you cry? :( Amazing and sad! Great job! :)

To quote Mulan.. "Sign me up for the next war!"

This is a technically well-written fic, but there is something missing from it... Believability? Tension? Suspense? All of the above, to some degree, actually. It feels very flat. I made it to about chapter 18, I think it was. But, yeah, otherwise good writing.

*crying* wow what an ending!
Thank you for sharing your story, it was a very enjoyable read.

This was amazing just amazing. I cried so much well done for making this fanfic

Hiya Lynliss!

I know I've not reviewed before but I tend to search for completed fan fictions and then review the last chapter summarising my views on the entire thing.

Anyway, I'm going off topic, I wanted to review in order to tell you what a pleasure it was to read this story and that I enjoyed every minute of it. I even went to look for a sequel and you've not dissappointed me :D

I shall go and read it now and hopefully review that when it's completed :D

I hope Legolas gets his happy ending. I was so sad when Nimoë died :( lol

TwilightxTanzie

How dos this not have more reviews it tis amazing.

hahahah.. Gimli is so infatuated with Galadriel.. he would agree to anything she suggested. I wish there were more Gimli/Galadriel fics.

Wow... I'm still crying from that ending. I cried out loud when dear Nimoe died and spent the next few chapters in absolute anguish but then the ending made me cry once again, but this time of happiness. you do know how to play with my emotions! and you do it so beautifully. your writing is stunning, you have a true gift for words. You paint a very vivid picture and i have to say that i am thoroughly impressed with how well you have woven your tale into Tolkien's work while managing to stay true to it. you are also the first writer i have found who has managed to properly write dialogue that fits with Tolkien's and consequently fits the characters so well. i thoroughly enjoyed finding this masterpiece and loved every minute of it. My only suggestion is that you seem to have forgotten Gimli a little bit during the battle ic Pelannor. But truly this has been an amazing read and i can't really convey in words just how much i loved it. thank you so much for sharing it with us, i know i will be reading this tale again and again. thank you

What a pleasure to read this, I especially loved the power of healing song that Nimoe employed, that really blessed me. I am looking forward to reading the sequel. :)

so you are gunna edit the cahpters?, if you are then i am gunna subscribe to you cuz i love this fic so much but i do feel that it could be improoved, some of it (most of it) is amazing and then there are parts that are just lacking, something, nothing big really it just makes me think that it could be better :) This is amazing!

Josi

I just found your story and love it! I just wanted to tell you that chapter 23 made perfect sense to me. I also love how you use the books, where the Ents do indeed go to Helm's Deep and Eomer is there the entire time, instead of the movie to write your story though I see a few people didn't understand that! Anyway, I'm off to read the rest of this and the sequal _

Chapter twenty three makes perfect sense in my opinion.

What don't you understand exactly?

I absolutely love your story so far(thank gods it's finished and i can read it all at once.

Merci for taking the time to do such things.

Au revoir.

R.S.

lol couldn't wait to get it down how much i lived it that I couldn't finish reading the story... lol o well... IId have to say that the last chapter had to be one of the best tho!

God Bless!

~Jess

OMG! i am crying that was so sad! how did Grima do such a thing that little son of a bitch! WAh! i was right when I said that your story would be good! I loved it! this is absoulutley one of the best stories I have yet ever read... I hope you get that writing job that you so much wanted!... well anyways I just wanted to say that I loved this story... I got so caught up in this story that I did not realise how long i have been sitting here... I started this aroundlike 8pm now it is 2am... and i am practically exasted... Your story was so dilightingly discriptive that I felt as if I was trulky there... Also your characters so strongly resembled those in the book that I now feel that you might be JRR Tolkein reincarnated... I am not saying that you are absoulutley the best I have ever read but you are definitely ONE of the best.. On a cale 1-10 you'd defintely have to be a 23 well Ima gonna go to bed now God bless!

~Jess