The song that you wrote at the end of chapter 2 I've heard it before, it was one of my favorites! Great job on the story. I loved the idea of them with out their memories! I hope that you continue this story until the end! Hope to see the next chapters soon!

Haha whatever I'm calling myself these days, right? That's certainly true. I'm still one Divine Wolfe though!

Well I'm glad you did this! Glad you posted it! And I'm still always cheering you on, no matter what you write. Haven't heard from you in a bit though, but hope you enjoy the holiday season~

hey, i really enjoyed this chapter. i'm totally liking the premise of your fic. keep it going!

It was good except for the fact that its obvious that they were going to die together. It was kind of entertaining finding out how, though. It was a good read.

Oh, that was great! I was actually afraid that Josh was going to shoot her in her sleep... and -probably a dumb question- would it be, "His name is Joshua, but he goes by 'the Composer.'"? Because that confused me a little (because his name is Yoshiya, but he goes by Joshua, etc.). Anyway, I can't wait to see more!

Aw. It probably would have turned out fine without me anyway. :D

UGH, I don't want to say anything, because this is like, already out, and then you'd be tempted to go back and fix it, and that's not good.

But.

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"His name is Joshua," Hanekoma said, leaning against the alley wall. "However he goes by-"

"-Rhyme" Konoshi gesturing to Rhyme's picture next to her on the screen.

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The first time I read it, I saw "His name is Joshua, but he goes by Rhyme." I mean, it's not completely incoherent, but Josh does NOT go by Rhyme. Plus, the sentences aren't even parallel because Rhyme doesn't have a code name (or, if she did, umm, I missed it). It just... distracts me for a few seconds. Brain says: wait what?

Anyway. I hecka like how you revised the last part. Personally, I'm kind of scared of using the L-word (Love)... but, since yours story is some epic "love transcends all time" thing, I guess it's okay.

I can't believe I forgot to sub to this. xD

Nice work.

- Jestry

Whoa this sorta confused me, but I love storylines that do that. Complex is good.

Beautiful. Please tell me this is a chapter fic and that there will (somehow) be more.

Aw, so you did snag Jestry~. Good for you. xD

So, yes, excellent descriptions all around. And awesome song. And, um, yes. Just a good story so far. Would have liked to know why Rhyme was so upset, but... whatever.

Wow... That was so.. meaningful. I loved the originality of it, and I was really intrigued. Sorry if that sounded lame, but I usually don't review and don't have much experience ( I only review if I REALLY like the piece and content of what I read, so when I had the undeniably persistent urge to review, I just knew it'd be one of my all time faves!)

Awesome Job!