Ah, Crazy Monk, jealousy is such an ugly emotion. Where does it say "humour" in the categorisation?

Anway, just wanted to say I've read a few chapters and I've really enjoyed it so far. :)

Your right, your version of The Shadows of Amn is much better than the way they wrote it in the game. I think I'd really like to read your take on some of the other Bhaalspawn tales. Thank you.

Still good! But this point of the game doesn't really offer you a choice... I went in to fight Irenicus without the Spellhold Mages once, and he killed me. Literally, he just casts one spell that makes your entire party die. You can't do anything to stop it, it's a cinematic sequence. You never even get to fight him.

This story is... deep, man. Really, serious quality from what I've read so far. I'd be angry at a pairing with Yoshimo, but it just so happens that the only character in the game that I hate more than Yoshimo... is ANOMEN! (Well, and Korgan the Evil Dwarf, but he doesn't count). So go Yoshimo! Break Anomen's heart and reduce him to a broken shell of a human being! I'll be laughing wickedly along with you the whole time, thief dude!

Wow, nice story. Sorry I didn't get to rev this earlier, but I was so thunderstruck at the power of the tale and I literally cried my eyes out at the tragic parts. I'm still recovering. *sniffle*

The relationship between Brynn and Yoshimo gives me a better perspective on the latter as a good, decent person (if not a rapscallion) and not someone simply hanging around waiting to be killed.

All in all, please continue the sequel. I've noticed it came to a screeching halt last time I read it. I want to know what happens to the rescue gang now that Touga Kuari double-crossed them...

Hkora the Weredragon: Grr, I hate traitors! They all deserve to be fed to my babies, served on a china plate piping hot with their mouths stuffed full of horse dung!

Me: Hkora, you're ranting again. (Which is quite an odd feature on a red dragon. But then again, she isn't really a real one.)

Hkora (blowing steam at me): Oh, sorry, reviewist. I apologize for my inconvenient rambling. (And I shall demonstrate it to you by snapping off that ugly head of yours!)

Me: Umm, was that sarcasm? (If it is, I am soo dead!)

Hkora (scratches muzzle): come to think of it, yes, that was sarcasm. Now I shall kill you. With tons of flourish... and flame. *nostrils start blowing fire*

Me: O_O' Oh (radio edit)! AH! *runs away, with a really passionate red dragon hot on my tail... literally*

Me: Oh boy (pant, wheeze), I don't want her (cough, wheeze) to (cough) review, she'll probably (pant, cough) flame you to no end... Meanwhile (hack, wheeze) I'm going to run from this (cough, cough) maniacal (hack) ward of mine! *continues running for the sake of not being burnt to well-done and beyond by Hkora*

Hi! I've just downloaded this to read at Uni, seeing as I don't know when I'll get net acess when I'm there I figured I'd better review you now. From your glowing reviews I think this fic looks good, and from the parts I have read already it also looks good! Great for finishing such a long fic, and I look forward to reading it! C

Wow... it couldn't get any better. You had me sitting on the ege of my seat. Makes me feel real bad now about killing Yoshimo now. Drats! I've a soft spot for all BG charters! Great story by the way. *rushes to the sequal*

This is indeed a spectacular story. I've been looking long and hard for a good, long and serious BG fanfic. This is one of the best BG fanfics i've ever seen, so i'm looking forward to seeng more fics from you.

-Steen

P. are only the second coolest class on the game. Next time, make a monk. I just love the idea of a monk and a kensei fighting together.

It's a little late, as I doubt you're even reading reviews anymore... but that was awesome. Probably if it was made a little longer it could be published. Seriously.

Hi

That was a wonderful story. I'm looking forward to reading more of you stories. Congratulations on graduating! Good luck where ever you go next.

One nit-pick: if you remove Jaheira from your party [in the game], she doesn't argue at all. I would think that Nalia would have been more insistent that they pursue Brynn. It didn't detrack from the story at all, though.

Thanks for sharing your writings with us. :)

~affert

Oh my god! That's one of the best stories I've evr read. I've been waiting it to end for ages. I take it you'll do TOB as well?

An excellent tale. you are truly talented.

That was really good.

I have been following your story line for a long time. I enjoy it and because I have all 3 games, and have played through at least 20 times, (still playing I might add) it is all familar to me. I hope to see more soon. You do plan on a ending don't you?

I never realized until now how much an update in this story brightens up my day. Will we be seeing Brynn fight Mellisan? I hope so _