Really loved the this fic. The last part, where everyone finds out who's cheating on who, reminds me of Hamlet, where everyone dies in the end.

I really enjoyed the story, I skipped passed the lemons, but I truly enjoyed the story component. You are a lovely writer.

I loved this!~

I have been trying to find great Teddy R L/James S P. and Teddy R L/Albus S P, and even James S P/Albus S P.

Could you recommend some to me?

I LOVED this story!

And I really liked Teddy's struggle with his true feelings and desire. And it was great seeing James making the first move! D

I love it!

I liked it. :) Even with all the cheating.

James/Teddy rock. l love them.

Loved it! :O tut tut Victoire! She was all angry at Teddy and she was just as much to blame. I'm glad Teddy was honest, I was worried it would end with Teddy and Victoire together and James all sad. So yay for Teddy! Very hot smut as well I must say!

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i loved how you made so not all was forgiven and how trust needed to be built again.

Wow. Nice touch with Victoire's infidelity.

I LOVED IT!

the whole who cheated on who wasn't confusing at all..just need to pay attention to get it.

anywoo like i mention before i thought it awesome.. what made me laugh was when you wrote X - The lemon starts here. - X

and

X - The lemon has ended. - X

that's the first i seen someone warn the readers precisely lol..idk..it made me laugh

this was your first slash? if so it bloody fuckin wicked!:D

I really liked this story! All the cheating got a little confusing at the end and there are six years between Teddy and James, not three, but everything else was really good. I liked Teddy's mantra of all the reasons that he couldn't be with James :)

great story. A lot of cheating but a happy ending. That's great XD

Wow EVERYONE cheated. Kind of shocking but good and interesting plot. Excellent job, loved the ending! D

Oh, this was amazing! A bit weird with everyone cheating on everyone, but if Teddy and James get to be together in the end, everything is perfect ;D

I loved Teddy, especially in the beginning, his thoughts and even his relationship with Victoire :]

Thank you very much :]

I've never been into the whole next generation thing, but that might just change with this story.