i love the idea of winter as an edmund's scar :)
i like this very much

Wonderful story! Enjoyed it!

A very good reason for staying unwed. Regarding scars, that truly is what families are for, at least one of the reasons. Nicely done.

aww! I miss Narnia :)

aw i loved it!

~where the wind blows

And Aslan protects them All.

Great story I love the scene where they pull him out of his nightmare in the throne room.

But you didn't put any other point of views in certianly people would have noticed their monarch's gathering around Edmund who was having a night terror? I don't mean snide comments but after the three pull him out perhaps Tumnus asking if Edmund needs something hot to drink.

what if your personal scar is yor family? What will you do then?

i loved this! i find myself in the same position as peter, being the oldest, having to look out for my younger sister and brother. that's what big sisters are for. though i do sometimes wish for an older brother, and when i read stories like these, it makes me want an older brother like peter. silly i know, but it's the truth. i know my brother and sister are there for me when i need them, just as i am there for them, no matter what. that's what family is for. )

Yikes. Edmund has scary dreams. Anyways...Good job. :)

Realised I haven't reviewed this. It's well written but I think the setting is unrealistic, the chances of Ed falling asleep in the throne room, deep enough to dream is highly unlikely. I prefer your Peter oneshot but looking forward to reading more of your stuff, realistic or not