Reviews for Exhibition
yuri plisetsky chapter 3 . 7/30/2016
lmao! Mikoto is me as a mom xD anyways it's such a waste you didn't complete this D:
ATouchofWinter chapter 3 . 7/16/2016
I love this! I feel so bad for Sasuke not knowing Naruto thought he was someone else. And Sasuke as a cat person is one of my favorite things. And his mom was amazing.
Guest chapter 3 . 11/23/2015
Sorry you never finished this one. It didn't seem like it was going to be very long. Maybe another chapter or two, so long as you didn't unnecessarily delve into Naruto and Sasuke's dark pasts beyond the basics.

What I like of the fic as it stands is that you wrote Naruto as a very capable professional, and made Sasuke into an artist. People don't usually write Sasuke as being creative, or Naruto as being this together. Both are refreshing. I also liked Mikoto very much. Most people don't write her as being that smart, so again this characterization is refreshing.

One thing I didn't like was Itachi. He had a very convoluted plan for why he wanted Sasuke to paint Naruto, and in the end, it didn't matter because Mikoto already knew everything. Seems like a waste of time to come up with a huge explanation for Itachi's character motives and then immediately negate it. Itachi just ends up looking like a weirdo.

But it's still an overall good fic.
kaname-luvr chapter 3 . 10/9/2015
Not sure if you ever go on this anymore, but this story was soo effing hilarious! From beginning to end! I hope you can come back to it. I just love the whole confusion thing going on between Sasuke and Naruto. I also love how you portrayed their personalities and Sasuke's quirky-ness. Once again, I hope you can come back to this one.
Duong-chan chapter 3 . 7/3/2015
Please tell me you are not dropping this fic 'cause it was totally awesome!
sasunaru addict chapter 3 . 10/18/2014
LOL omgg haha pervy Mikoto was such a nice surprise! I love ittt lol

And that misunderstanding between SasuNaru (or just on Sasuke's part about Naruto) ughh gonna kill meee until it's resolved eeek
Nanashi1 chapter 3 . 7/21/2014
Hey, so I've read this fic over and over and I still ove it so very much!
Just tell me, are you ever going to publish another chpater? Or finish it?
Thanks
Kind regrads
secretparadise.mine chapter 3 . 1/3/2014
hurm hurm hurmm hurmmmmmmmmmmmmm updateeee!
SweetHunniiBunnii chapter 3 . 2/23/2013
Really really nice work!(:
darkhellionkitten chapter 3 . 1/8/2013
Please do not leave things as they are. I love the dynamic between the two of them in this story. Thanks
Q3APo chapter 3 . 8/16/2012
aw, i love mikoto. this story seems simple at first but gradually it gets darker. i can't wait for more.
LyRiCho chapter 2 . 6/19/2012
Ooooh Itachi you devil you!... Heheheehehehe! Loooove it! Love the whole explanation to Naruto's name to the old perv's book and awwww! XD
LyRiCho chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
Ok I've read this before! I know it! Why didn't I review? Dammit!... Well anywhoo... Love it still... And Naru is a giant impatient moron lol love him!
Nimbafuu chapter 3 . 5/2/2012
Damn damn damn! I looked up to see when it was last updated and nearly cried! : I completely LOVE this story, it makes me so sad to think you won't finish it! (And I was hoping for a steamy yum-yum scene).

This is the first story I've read with a perverted Mikoto in it, and I loved it. Sasuke's humiliation killed me too :P
3 chapter 3 . 2/21/2012
abandoned? DX
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