What's with the 'ya'? There are other words that can be used for confirmation like 'yes' and 'yep' don't just stick with ya

One of the things I loved about this story was that you called Itachi’s daughter Katara. It fits since the story has some of the same vibes as Avatar.

I can’t help but think that Saaya is the spy.

DOPE NOT DUPE CANT YOU EVEN SPELL

CHIDORI YOU GOD DAMMIT IDIOT NOT CHORDI LEARN THE NAMES YOU DUMBASS

Poor Sakura, looks like she lost her chance to be with Naruto.

Hope Naruto can make it.

Great chapter.

Sasuke and Danzo are assholes.

The thing that always gets me is the bullshit that you can't destroy the revived Edo Tenshi, but you can. The thing that gives Orochimaru or anyone else control of them is the kunoi in the head, take out the head with the kunoi and the control is gone.

If I'm riding my guessing I think this is the third banishment story I've read about Naruto and I have to say it's one of the best I like that he actually achieved his dream even though it was a different country and I love how you based so many of the characters from different movies especially the Spartans I hope to enjoy many more of your stories mainly the Naruto ones.

Average. The two biggest issues were needing to proofread and, well, making your bad guys less cliché. Danzo and Sasuke would end up having every other nation band together against them. Your enemies are generally not stupid when your talking on that kind of scale. Hell, half the clans would rebel probably after killing Tsunade.

Also, Naruto why would Naruto ever let his adopted children know? Sure if they find out he would have to fess up, but, really, letting a child know he or she was a result of a rape? How does that help the child? I'm no expert, but I'd expect such a conversation to be delayed until they were adults, if then. For all intents and purposes they were Naruto's kids, end of story...

Love an OP Naruto

Interesting story

well it's all over and i must say an awesome story NaruSaku what's not to like