Really good fic, don’t be afraid to alter canon to make the separatists be better, good luck and plz don’t let this fic die it’s really really good.

Honestly, I don't even know where to start.
Your work here is a masterpiece, there is no doubt about it. The way you portray your characters is solid, with a firm grasp on their personalities and a tendency to change them as the time passes, instead of mantaining the same characteristics during the entire story, which amplify the realism overall.
Your choice to write about the Confederacy is brilliant, instead of going along the same route that "separatists are the bad guys" present in the majority of the works on this site.
I always had a soft spot for the droids and showing them the way you did is phenomenal. I had the opinion that I knew a vast majority of the droid types, even some obscure ones like the cortosis battle droid, annihilator droid and the b3 battle droid. Only for you to show units and vehicles I had no idea even existed such as the GAT and the baron battle droid.
I also became a fan of Hk-47 and can't wait to see how you are going to introduce elements of the old republic in this fanfiction.
Honestly, some of the only things that I felt lacking was a bigger presence of separatist politics and leadership, alongside some down time between missions to give more depth to your characters and the reactions of the Republic to the droid's sucesses. I am aware that OOM-9 is not interested in the least in the game of politics, but I would like to see more of some characters whom barely got any screentime in the clone wars. The prime example would be Karina the Great which was basically the supreme ruler of the geonosians for Heaven's sake, and got less than three minutes of appearance before she was killed off. I would like to know if OOM-9 would appear in more known battles that appeared in the clone wars like the Second Battle of Geonosis ( he could save the queen and the factory while gaining a new superweapon and the favor of the geonosians) and the Zillo incident (In which if the general and his force-user were smart, they could gain the allegiance of a creature that I refuse to believe is not sentient and is also invulnerable to lightsaber strikes) .
Don't let the others get the best of you by saying the separatists don't deserve any work, you are one of the best writers I ever saw with a work that is splendid.
Anxiously waiting for the next chapter, Ares out.

Glad to see you back in action.

Yay! It updated, just when I thought maybe you wouldn't be coming back!

Man I thought you were dead with how long you took to update! Love this chapter by the way!

Its been a whole year since this story was updated, but never the less I will continue to comeback everday to check if iit has been updated

and i will reread bits or all of it

because thats what U created
something so beautiful, special, and one of a kind

i hope you are doing well and continue to update this story

btw has ur opinion of star wars battlefront 2 changed?

I want to see OOM-9 Battle Anakin and Ahsoka.

Good run
Great idea

DON’T LET THE FLAME DIE OUT

The stag bettle fighters are the advanced fighter?

You did a really good job on these fanfic, i am really impressed. The history is well build and the characters (until now) are not so deep but captivating. The effort you put into the story is noticeable, not to mention that your notes at the end of each chapter are the icing on the cake. Great to see another point of view of the war and CIS people not being treated as purely evil clowns.

wow after two years reading fanfic I finally find my favorite conquerer of Nabbo.

I haven't started reading this yet but I am am about to because the title sounds hilarious.

This is was such a wild ride! I loved the chapter! There were a few grammatical errors but nothing too serious. Always appreciate the references you include and how you source at the bottom. Helps me learn more about the star wars universe.

Amazing chapter

Love the references espically calling G0-T0 "the fat one"