Great can't wait to read the next chapter

this has a very good polt. and if u get back to this story i hope to read the next chapter.
and LOVED it. Amu andTadss battle seen was very good!

I love it!

Love the story line!

The story follows like a typical episode of Shugo Chara! Both of you did a nice job. Including detail about the battle, but not too much to make it boring. Tadase seems like his usual prince-like-self. Amu knows what she's doing, but why does she seem frightened all the time? For some reason I always saw her as headstrong, but not to the point of arrogance. Maybe she changed through the series... I haven't really kept up with Shugo Chara.

The first chapter was a nice introduction to get the reader situated. I felt that some parts were repetitive though. It may have just been the word choice I wasn't comfortable with. But over all it was good.

Second chapter was good as well. The only thing that stuck out was the use of plural words to describe the conductor. But that's just a minor issue.

... And I just realized this story was updated 2 years ago..

so maybe my review is unnecessary S

If you decide to continue the story, though, I'm interested to follow it~

please update I am begging you!

amazing story you two it reminds me of the form you guys made

OOH! Is that Keen? LOL if it was that would be funny!

Bye guys!

~Vicki

yey chapter 4 please

yey

HeyHey!

AWESOME story there!

Please Update:)

Hehe But take your time. No Pressure. No Time Limit:)

this is pretty good so far. Keep going :) I've read some of Lozza-chan's stories. You have talent, and from this, so does your friend :)

-carp~ god bless!

Hasta la ~Tadamu, Kukaya, Nagima~

Wow, This story is interesting! I'm glad it's a Tadamu fanfic. Although i like both Tadamu and Amuto, I'm more of a Tadamu fan!

Keep up the good work, love it!

Awesome cant wait for the next one

this first chapter is amazing! not many people make stories about Tadamu! I like tadamu the most cuz ikuto pisses me off.I hope to read the next chapter!