It's adorable! w

Aww w I liked that one a lot :) I really liked the ending; tears strated seeping out of the corner of my eyes xD it was just too sweet. Really well written in my opinion. I just wish you would've added the little teasing "honey" somewhere near the ending to make it all tie in together.

Just one thing...when did matts boxers come of? Lolz

OH THAT WAS EPIC.

XD seriously, one of the best MxM lemons I've ever read. You're an awesome writer~ :D

aw this fic

was just

perfect!

I luved it!

I fucking LOVE

mello as the uke one

he's so cute!

And Matty was so seme *w*

COF COF COF

Nice work

oh and

forgive my sucky english

haha

x3

I love this story not only because of the fact that Mello and Matt are the main characters, but that Matt was on top! I always pictured Matt on top rather than Mello. The whole 'bad ass' image for Mello basically says on the bottom. The awesome people, like Matt, are always on top. Thank you for typing It was the first one I read with Matt on read finally! X3

Very sweet. I love lemons that are sweet 3 You did very well

OH. MY. DEAR. FUCKING. GOD. D:

This has to be one of the best written MM lemons EVER. As in EVER. IN ALL HISTORY OF DEATH NOTE LEMONS. D:

-inner fangirl explodes-

You are a hero. 3

I LOVED it ! Please write more ! You're an excellent writer , keep it up ! ]

haha, the end is funny. 3 this was sweet and sexy in the right ways. nice work.

*-* oh my god... my fangirl brain just about EXPLODED! I am officioally in LOVE with this fanfiction *fangirl brain explodes* Love the title too, all too true *-*

I always have trouble picturing Mello in the state of withering and begging. . It was a great one-shot!