Oh my gosh, the nostalgia is so real with this story. I used to read and write a lot of fanfiction and I remember your name from the Y!G community which I was apart of back in the day when I first found out what Yaoi was as an innocent 18 years old. (I think we were buddies (followed each other, however their friend system worked) on there, my username was Rikku22 (or something like that).

I wrote 10 chapters to this prompt challenge back then with Lupin & Severus from Harry Potter, and have been trying to find the rest of the prompts for ages, because I've entertained the idea of rewriting all the prompts with drabbles/oneshots, even though I haven't wrote fanfiction since I last updated on this profile.

It is a long shot that you will see this, but thank you for posting this. I really enjoyed these little drabbles and I think my love of fanfiction might be rekindled a little.

A little confusing at times, but daaaaaaaaaamn so good... Beautiful.

Hey! Another great job! It's really nice you by separating the paragraphs into sections!

Holy shit. That was fantastic.

Usually I don't care much for these kind of stories (with prompts and only writing a few paragraphs) but I really enjoyed some of these (Specifically 'Betrayal', 'Good Night' and 'Torture') And what a good way to end this story~

I don't have much crit because, as I said, I don't read many short pieces so I don't really know how to compare this to anything. u_u sorry...

Anywho, typos, if you care~

(In ‘Insanity’)

He knew Tseng was an intelligent and observant man, so he could never understand why he was so concerned over his Aibous behaviour.

“Aibou’s”

(in ‘weeping’)

Of course, he had stopped after be given a few old ones to keep as his own.

“be” to “being”

(in ‘mystery’)

Why did Renos eyes soften when he gazed at Rude alone?

“Reno’s”

(in ‘Alone’)

People who be a constant part of his life and actually give a damn about his opinion were a novelty.

There should probably be a ‘would’ between ‘who’ and ‘be’

(in ‘Torture’)

Rude's first thought once he was allowed in his partners hospital room,

“partner’s”

(I got more than halfway through this before I found any typos, and they're all pretty small ones :D)