Reviews for The Watcher in the Darkness
Guest chapter 11 . 10/14/2018
My vote that you put out for chapter 11 will be for Danny and Vlad to stay together and have a stronger father-son bonding.
Redditwow chapter 11 . 8/8/2018
Option a
Guest chapter 43 . 1/29/2017
Gahhh! I have no words for the amazingness that this story was... Man, it made me cry so much in the later chapters... And the ending was extremely realistic(well, as much as a DP fanfic can be). I neither feel happy, or sad with this ending. But, as Clockwork says, 'everything is as it should be...' :] Now I've definitely got to sleep... I binge read this all night. And I definitely need the rest after reading this. You truly did a wonderful job on this. Thank you for making and sharing this gem with us readers!
DragonSoulofFire chapter 21 . 6/29/2016
im so confused between this and the last chapter...
PhoenixWarriorFox88 chapter 14 . 1/26/2016
Yes! *crosses fingers* I hope they go to Clockwork next. Or figure out that something was wrong and track down Vlad and Danny again.
PhoenixWarriorFox88 chapter 8 . 1/26/2016
I really hope there's a chapter where Danny's friends and family see Danny as a four year old living with Vlad.
lunarmuse777serenity chapter 11 . 9/18/2015
A
fghfgdfgd chapter 19 . 8/2/2015
I enjoyed this but I'm I kind of got too confused to continue xx thank you though
Kimori Takahashi chapter 43 . 12/14/2014
What a lovely ending!

after reading this, I feel like clockworks should be Phantom's father, Fenton to Fenton, and Master to Masters...so two clones and the original...
Ruby 1334 chapter 43 . 8/21/2014
Wow...
Okay, firstly, Get ready for a LONNNNNGGG review. (I mostly blame that on not reviewing each chapter.)

The ending, was PERFECT! I LOVED IT! The quotes were great to read also!
I also liked how you showed us how Vlad and Jack both did wrong, but realized their mistakes and learned from them.

Your OC (All I remember about his name was that it started with K.) was AMAZING! You know how with most OC's people hate them and would just not like to read fanfiction because of them? Well, your OC was so GOOD that it made me want to find out more about them, and their personalty was very intriguing! I would definitely give him an 10/10!

I also enjoyed reading and finding out about how this whole thing was mostly just another lesson for Danny! (haha, GOLD! I didn't even work that out!) But the whole thing about Vlad truly being happy and Danny FENTON also not hating him that much anymore truly made me smile! :)

I think in chapter...39, was it? Anyways, when Vlad was telling the fairytale story and the butler (CANNOT REMEMBER HIS NAMEEE!) was in the corner murmuring to himself or something...I was just thinking: Jack's...DEAD. Jack. Is. Dead. And Danny's listening to Vlad say a fairytale!? The whole thing was really creepy to me. I felt like everyone had just lost it and become mentally ill or something! That chapter I had also almost cried...man...I just felt so SAD for Vlad. (haha, I rhymed! XD)

The internal conflict thing was certainly interesting...

This story really got me in the feels...and that's a good thing too! :D

Truly loved this story, this has got to be one of my favourite DP fanfiction!
PredatorPuck chapter 14 . 6/17/2014
Really good thinking haha clone!
PredatorPuck chapter 6 . 6/17/2014
Like your chapter
PredatorPuck chapter 4 . 6/17/2014
Hehe nice poetry
PredatorPuck chapter 1 . 6/17/2014
Like
Guest chapter 43 . 5/3/2014
That was really gorgeous
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