This is a lovely story. Thank you for sharing it. I'm really happy it's 8018 and they're very IC from what I can tell. Also, love the fight scene at the beginning of the fic.

Such good dialogue, and nice use of Shamal too.

I have horrid memory so I don't quite recall if I've reviewed this story before, but I'd like to say I absolutely love the way you develop your characters. Also, Hibari joining the mafia and Reborn letting on that he knows quite a bit is very amusing.

This fic was very, very nice, I loved it. There are very few people who write good, lengthy 1880 fics, so I'm glad I found yours. :) I love how you add humor once in a while. I especially loved the part when Hibari breaks down the door of the unoccupied apartment only to have Yamamoto appear at the one next door. I could imagine getting all confused in his mind even though it doesn't show on his face. XD Also, the character development of both Hibari and Yamamoto was nice, it really added to the appeal of the fic. Your characterization on the two was great!

uh! its kinda sad to read this as the last part, hope u make the skuel of this one T.T

ah! si its a good bye? u-uh

kinda sad to yama-chii also his oyaji

haha, hibird so cute in this part

its totally awesome! gonna read da next chapter

interesting

Oh this is brilliant. I seriously love Yamamoto's nonchalant attitude. He really suits the uptight Hibari. Brownie points for Tsuna being all cute and naive about the insistent application in their family.

To start things off, I'd say this story has a hell of a lot of good points. No real errors in spelling or grammar from what I can see. And the plot. Ah it was delicious. Yes I do believe a sequel is in order. If not still...

Very very very good is what this is...

my gawd i read this story in one breath and it was AMAZING. srsly it was damn awesome! AND IT NEEDS A SEQUEL~! 33 awesome stuff

i really enjoyed this fic :) my favorite pairing for reborn is yamamoto hibari! i liked the AU perspective of the story, but the ending finished so quickly! u mentioned that you were going to write a sequel? PLEASE DO. this story has so much potential. or at least another epilogue :P

thanx :)

I love how the atmosphere of this fic gave me.

Very mature-like, deep-like ~

You're a great writer (:!

Just to ask, is there going to be a sequel or something? o-o