:( Sad, but a great chapter. Thanks for writing. x

AW! That was such a sweet way of looking at Su's turning! *U* Love it! Rock on! Can't wait for more! It's been a while!

Lovely chapter. Thanks for writing x

So...is this what I think it is? XP Anyway, this was very interesting! The description, the reality, everything...wow! One hundred words can produce a lot! *U* Rock on!

What emotional power you achieve in this chapter. It would be heartbreaking to me, too, except that we know that everything ends well. My favorite line: Lucy thinking that she can pretend "that the lilies are snow, that the sun is rising, that Narnia still waits for its Golden Age." Just glorious! (It's moments like this that, despite the fact that Lewis is just about my favorite author, I want to shake him. Why did he have to shut the Pevensies out of Narnia when schmoes like Gumpas got to live there forever?) Once again, you manage to distill an entire world into a very few words.

The last line especially is gorgeous. Nice, also, to see Polly featured in a Narnian story. She kind of gets overlooked, and she's a wonderful character. You made good use of her here.

Well, it's not about a sunset, but it is related, and quite ingeniously, at that. It works so beautifully in this ensemble of pieces. Definitely a favorite chapter of mine!

Aw! How sad! This is a gorgeous look at what their last days in Narnia could have seemed! So sad, but gorgeous, and I LOVE the relationship Lu has with Caspian! U So sweet! *U*

Oh, that's rough. Poor Lucy. You know, we really don't get much of their reactions, so it's neat to see it fleshed out! I wasn't so keen on Caspian 'gripping' her hand, neither the choice of word nor the fact that he did, but, well, that's just me.

God be with you,

Eavis

Excellent chapter! Sad, but beautiful and captured the emotions perfectly. Thanks for writing. x

Ah! Such a lovely preview of things to come...

Thank you for updating! A lovely one this time x

Aw! How sweet! Loved this, no matter the length! VDT is one of my favorite, too, after PC (maybe ahead of LWW...)! U Good luck with everything! *U*

I am enjoying these much. I know I could never pack so much into just a few words. Keep on!

Blessings,

Eavis

Aw! I loved that! The other girls wanting to hear more and Polly being lost within her own, lived fairy tale and speaking of the sunrise with such a light in her eyes were my favorite parts. XD Although, I guess that's pretty much all of it, huh? lol. As always, rock on! U *U*

Ever-so sincerely signed,

Shizuku Tsukishima749 :D ;D :) ;)