Poetic.

Wahoo that was a weird chapter, but I somehow liked it! New perspective.

This was absolutely and utterly amazing; every piece was pretty much perfect, and your writing style is fantastic.

That was awesome! I absolutely loved it.

This was really interesting.

Very nice. While most stories focus on major events, you do a great job describing the small moments that shape these characters. I love the way you describe the small movements of the characters - a smirk, a stroke of the hand, footfalls. Gives a nice, tangible feel to the stories.

I will say, you have a way with words. I re-read all of these chapters in one shot. great stories.

Just sad.

Good work nevertheless.

Oh Cameron playing Derek was great and sad at the same time.

He's already halfway there, his body slowing, falling into the rhythms of sleep. "You comin' to bed?"

"Soon," she promises, pressing her lips to his. He smiles because it isn't her he's kissing as slumber takes him captive.

Cameron waits until Derek is snoring again before retreating, shutting the door with a click behind herself. Her posture straightens and her face is blank as she releases Allison Young with a quiet sigh. The probability that Derek Reese will perform at adequate levels during tomorrow's mission is now within an acceptable range.

She resumes her patrol, her bare feet padding down the hall to John's room.

Great work with your story's it seems Derek and Allison are together from your work.

"Submit to chip extraction."

She jerks her head to look at him and he calls the rapid movement and wide eyes surprise.

Oh, that was so sad, and would he take out the C4 charge or check the chip?

Replacing Riley with Allison, that something odd, and her being in 1999 when Cameron comes to find them odd as well. If Allison is here, that means she didn't die? and yes.

Allison working on the computers and John can only think of Cameron then he sends her off away satellite camp, and a waits has Cameron return. I hope i got understand this chapter

Cameron hiding in the shadows watching John, Derek face off with a T800 making sure everything OK.

When he ask her about 1999 why she was different and why doesn't she act like that, she tells him that wouldn't be real. He says nothing about you is real to her.

"I am not organic, but I am not imaginary."

"Fine," he concedes. "But you're a blank slate. Your actions are dictated by programming, pre-defined algorithms, creating personas to accomplish your goals. Underneath all of that, there's…nothing."

"There is me," she insists and to be honest, he'd kind of forgotten she was there. "I am real."

Very lovely exchange between them and that last part when she checked on him in has bedroom, heart warming

I'm really enjoying these drabbles. Such delightful angst. Everything can't be all fluff, I guess. I thought chapter 10 was awesome. I loved the part where Cameron ponders how "they do not take defection lightly." Goes along with her whole "time bomb"concern in the second episode of season 2. In Chapter 10, Cameron is sentimental. Then, in Chapter 11, we see the cold, calculating Cameron, in all her glory. So different, yet all believable.

Very very very dark.

I really hope you don't feels so bad, writing this out of your emotions.

You would need help.

I just came across this series for the first time. Very well done. Chapters 7 and 8 are especially strong. Very good angst in chapter 7, and it flows quite nicely into the last section of chapter 8.

some great shorts here. I'm Surprised I have not seen them before now. would be great if you would turn a couple of them into full stories. but that takes a great deal of dedication. you have some great talent, keep up the good work.