I LOVED seeing Bella defend herself; it was so refreshing!

I love that you didn't rush getting them together. You're letting the story take shape and I can respect that

I appreciate that you kept the integrity of Edward's character and the things that matter to him, at this point in the story, instead of just rushing for the fairytale romance right out the gate.

I'm loving this story so far and I'm beyond curious to see what caused Edward and Alice's falling out.

omg so goodddd!

Love this story! So good written, interesting characters and plot.. thanks for your time writing this. I have to say also that you as an author developed so much, unfortunately I stopped reading some of your previous stories as they just didn't make sense to me, the character's emotion development was non- existent, and I just could not really get into it, didn't believe it.. but this one! So goooood :) really great job!

One of the best twilight fanfiction I've ever read. you did a good job

wait... are peanut butter and strawberry ice cream sandwiches a thing?

In the middle of this pandemic I totally hit a nostalgia phase and have been re-reading my favourite books nonstop. After rereading Twilight, I instantly searched my long-abandoned fan fiction account faves list for this story. Wow. A decade later and it still totally has me! I read this as a middle schooler in 2010 and was totally in love with it. I can't tell you how many times I read this story, but it still leaves me laughing and crying and sympathizing and swooning the same way. This inspired a creative writing journey for me and I remember being in awe of the super cool high school girl in the UK with the rad writing skills. Thank you for leaving it up, this fic was better than the actual books to me and holds a special place in my heart. Peanut butter and strawberry ice cream sandwiches forever 3

Actually the worst thing I have done is study

Ok you know adult exist! Why does Esme not go with them? She's his mother and she could spare them and Edward many problems expecially since he has been expelled, almost. Bella is really stupid

Ok I have to say this: Bella and Edward are really stupid

Loved it.

When I read that she was skinny but her stomach was big I instantly though ‘oh, she’s pregnant.’ And I was right.

This is the first time I’ve ever cried over a fanfic. Over anything fictional that want a characters death. I don’t like it. It’s soooooo gooooood.

The last thing Bella says in this chapter reminds me of in The Philosophers Stone movie when Harry goes off on his broom and Hermione says ‘What. An. Idiot.’ I read it the exact way I remember Emma Watson saying it, just switched Idiot out for Moron. It made me laugh.