This is a really cool story :D

You should really continue, please! :D

aaaah, this is a really nice story. a nice take on the whole idea of the Imoogi and everything, very original. :)

i hope that this isn't the end of it, cause it's so much fun to read. :D

DUDE. THIS STORY. IT'S WIN.

I have seen some Zoro-origin stories and this is, by far, the most creative out of them all. It takes a foreign mythological concept with an amazingly in-character look to one of Oda's most popular characters with a grace that is rarely seen these days! It explains everything without tearing apart the myth at the seams or completely creating an AU version of One Piece! This story NEEDS to continue! I SAY THIS WITH THE URGENCY OF A SPAZZ-TASTIC ZORO-ADDICT! PLEASE!

~Linhae

PS: I am unable to remain calm in reviews... My bad :D

Another great chapter.

Once again well written.

Another well written chapter. You blend the legend with the One Piece storyline well. Since it seems to follow the story I wonder if Zoro will get it when Kuina dies?

I like this story. You could tell that the two snake-things (As I have dubbed them) really cared about each other, but at the same time had no idea how the other thought. It was really interesting to read. Please continue!

SCotS

Interesting story so far though I have yet to see anything One Piece.