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JJRenae chapter 14 . 6/22 I love this story. I very much wish there was more. I really want to know how Jade would handle attending Hogwarts with Dumbledore. Would he be a Gryffindor or Slytherin in this story? I have a feeling he would be a Slytherin but because of the timing of Voldemort just having returned I doubt it would be safe for Jade in Slytherin. Though I have a feeling he could take whatever they threw at him. I thought you were going to have Jade date someone closer to his age so I was really surprised by Kingsley, but they seem to work so far. Anyway I doubt you will ever read this but I really wish this story was continued. |
DemiwitchSlytherin chapter 1 . 4/6 Did someone look after him when he was a baby? Cuz kids that young can’t look after themselves. |
Emerald Rose nee Potter chapter 14 . 11/2/2017 Intriguing, I like it. I like it a lot. I look forward to the next chapter. |
SortingHat chapter 9 . 6/10/2017 Tonks reminds me of the typical bleeding heart liberal but instead of just one man it's the whole nation! Then people wonder why jobs are going to automation in a hurry not because machines are any better but because people are too lazy to fight for their jobs. Not enough YES in the voice of the people or otherwise the situation would change almost overnight. There is a robot revolution coming and it's coming fast. Once the Trump economy kicks in which signs are it's already happening due to minimum wages being too high employers are going to opt easy street. And that is robotics. We are in an *arms* race so to speak like the cold war in the 60s only it has to do with automation. There is a site called Will My Job Be Automated to have a general risk to see if your job will be taken. Minimum wage when it goes up causes the prices of everything else to go up so what do they do? They demand MORE minimum wage which just keeps escalating until something gives. The purpose of service sector jobs is to be a stepping stool to get a better job so you can have a resume/good But now those better jobs are nearly non existent. |
SortingHat chapter 8 . 6/10/2017 That kind of scenario of weather is actually pretty extreme for Britain. Kinda like this year 1990. /article. 1990 Dry and sunny. Record-breaking warmth in February and August Here is July of that year. July - Very dry and sunnywith temperatures close to average Mean Temperature18.2C Monthly Highest31.3CTotal Rain 8 mm Monthly Lowest7.5CTotal Sun273 hrs The first 6 days of July were very cool and changeable. On the 1st, the maximum temperature was only 17.4C. The remainder of the month was warm or very warm by day, but often cool at night. There were several hot days, and on both the 20th and 21st the temperature rose above 31C. No measurable rain fell between the 7th and the 27th, and the unsettled end to the month produced little rain, with no daily fall during July exceeding 3mm. |
SortingHat chapter 7 . 6/10/2017 Not sure if you have done your research but London shuts down in the snow. They are along the same level as Atlanta Georgia or Washington DC where just a little bit freaks them out. London used to get more snow until the 1970s and a small gain in the 1980s from a few cold years which artificially boosted totals. |
SortingHat chapter 8 . 6/10/2017 By the way all your rants about flamers will only encourage them to try new tactics doing nothing to actually stop them and sometimes flamers have valid advice as nothing is ever 100 percent praise. |
SortingHat chapter 7 . 6/10/2017 I can tell this has been edited as you went from being the usual *feeler* that is common in these types of fics to a thinker. I am pretty sure that is why they abandon these fics a lot is they are so into feeling their way thru they miss the forest for it's trees and feel discouraged when they don't meet X number of reviews or whatever. They lose their *vibe* or *mojo* and just quit looking for the next big high. A thinker like you are becoming will keep going thru with it till you see it's done or you fleshed it out as much as you possibly can before you run on empty and that gives us something decent to read. Something that DOESN'T give this site the pit of voles it is known for. |
SortingHat chapter 1 . 6/10/2017 Not sure if you caught your own error but *sleeting rain* is bad for London because London has crap infrastructure to handle snow and shut down over 3cm of it. Hell sometimes the *wrong kind of sunshine* shuts down their train systems. |
maana999 chapter 12 . 5/6/2017 Good luck finding him Voldie, he's not who you think (Evil grin). So, I guess Jade took out his fav. knives again? |
maana999 chapter 11 . 5/6/2017 Poor Neville... I liked him. But, hey, at least he's out of Dumbles clutches, I guess. I kind of want to know what Jade did to the dada deatheater... does that mean that I'm evil? Probably, but I don't care. I know I'm a sadist. |
maana999 chapter 10 . 5/6/2017 I don't know why, but this keeps amusing me. It's to bad that people can recognise him so easily, otherwise he could just go to hogwarts as Jade. Not that I think he needs the education, like at all. Voldie is SO dead the moment he goes after him. So is Dumbles, by the way. (Evil laughter) |
maana999 chapter 9 . 5/6/2017 LOL I don't think I have laughed so hard for ages! Jade was friends with KINGSLEY? Awesome. |
maana999 chapter 8 . 5/6/2017 D*mn, I like Ronks. Though wolfstar isn't to bad, I supose. I love the character you gave him. He's... dangerous to say the least. I like how at ease he is. He doesn't feel the need to disarm Tonks at all. Like he knows she won't be able to harm him. |
Guest chapter 14 . 2/13/2017 my dear friend carry on with the story please |