Reviews for Closer
erikalu53006 chapter 45 . 4/23
NOOOO! Plz,Update!
KurosakiRukia81 chapter 45 . 4/8/2019
Okay, my roomie was rereading this fic for the nth time and hounded me into reading it as well. And now I owe her some baskin and robin 'cause I absouletly loved your work! It's so good! Hope you update the sequel tho and did I mention that I am absolutely hooked with Sasuino.
Ai chapter 45 . 3/27/2019
I need to spill it out so I can get out of here and stop wishing that Kishimoto took the sasuino relationship dynamics from this story. I love how you've potrayed Sasuke,Ino,Naruto and Sakura. They are so on point and the relationship between Sasuke and Ino is an absolute delight to read. Their budding friendship was my favourite part along with Naruto and Ino's bond(It made me melt into a gooey mess). Anko's crazy and Kakashi's a perverted gentlemen to a 'T',and that's why I adore them *squeals*. Tho Sasuke is an idiot for that 'get her knocked plan' but I really do belive he is a jackass enough to do that. And my perfect Itachi (Ah~ I am totally his fangirl). The story's awesome and your sasuino reunion it hawt. It's not only one of the best/if not best sasuino stories on net and if you ever update you'll be making a lot of people very happy. Kudos for your awesome work!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/20/2018
Update?
SeiryuuSuzaku chapter 45 . 9/6/2018
And so it ends. The most interesting plot twist/element was introduced here, what in the world is Kabuto planning to do with an Ino clone and how much mayhem will it cause. I can just imagine the original and the clone meeting in a one on one death match on the battlefield in the 4th Shinobi World War. That'd be fun to read.
SeiryuuSuzaku chapter 44 . 9/6/2018
Interesting means of keeping Ino out of the battles to come on Sasuke's part. I hope Ino smacks him real hard for this. All kinds of F'd up no matter how much he wants to protect her.
SeiryuuSuzaku chapter 43 . 9/6/2018
Coming right down to the wire, two chapters left. I'm so sad now. No way it has a proper conclusion in two chapters.
SeiryuuSuzaku chapter 42 . 9/5/2018
Well the hurt is about to get laid upon someone, or multiple someones. This next chapter should be really good.
SeiryuuSuzaku chapter 41 . 9/5/2018
I would advise archiving this on AO3 (Archive of Our Own) rather than the adult version of this site since AO3 is more popular, but to each their own.

To be fair I think you stuck within the site guidelines and rules outside of the fact you keep putting little snippets of lyrics at the start of each chapter since around chapter 35 or so which is not within the guidelines and rules for the site for the obvious reasons of copyright/plagiarism troubles on their end for users ignoring this rule, but I guess you were one of the lucky ones who had his/her story slip through the cracks when they were doing their periodic purge.

I don't really know why you included the lyrics snippets though, they add nothing to the story and just put you at unnecessary risk of having the story removed. I know it ticks a lot of users off that the site has been hammering down on actually enforcing their guidelines and rules in recent years, but they're well within their rights and in this case it's a small thing that would go a long way.

The M rated content you've included is actually perfectly within their M rating specifics. Not overly descriptive or graphic. Not bordering or crossing into MA territory which they don't allow so you're good on that front. Just remove the lyrics and your story'd be safe.
SeiryuuSuzaku chapter 39 . 9/4/2018
Nice bombshell drop there Reiko, oh I can just imagine Sasuke's reaction to that one. This is gonna be good!
SeiryuuSuzaku chapter 35 . 9/4/2018
Oh, hi Pein.
SeiryuuSuzaku chapter 34 . 9/4/2018
Oh the burn of disappointment. Feels bad man.
SeiryuSuzaku chapter 33 . 9/4/2018
Reunion feels aplenty, I admit the last scene has had me crying like a baby for a good amount of minutes now. Also she saved Itachi, yay!
SeiryuuSuzaku chapter 32 . 9/4/2018
Typical he's gonna get to know his uncle before he gets to know his dad. Somehow that's quite fitting.
SeiryuuSuzaku chapter 31 . 9/4/2018
LOL What a very Sasuke reaction to his own child. Don't recognize him right off the bat and treat him poorly only to surely regret it later. I'm having flashbacks to how he reacted to meeting Sarada for the first time in a decade in Boruto. That poor girl was so traumatized by the end of that arc especially with the whole "Karin might be your biological mom not Sakura" thing that was also going on.
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