Yup. If only he knew. : )

I really enjoyed this. Very well done.

This was very well written. I found the movement between the flashback and the 'present time' very easy to follow and thought they really added to the flow of the story. Numair was well-written and see,med very IC.

I did find Ozorne out of character in bits- he seemed a little too pompous, rather than evil. It made him seem like a bit of a characateur. His flight seemed a little too easy, which felt a little lazy to me, but I did really enjoy your ending and like your logic on why it was included that way.

Good job, overall!

KrisEleven~

I'm a sucker for stories about Arram, unsurprisingly. I like this, especially the bit with Shakith at the end. I like the idea of the barrier spells being the reason for Ozorne and Arram fighting, as well. I personally would have put in more angst and injuries and so on, but that's because I live to torture Numair!