great work

Sweet!

Ok... I have read a couple of your works and while I lile the narrative ypu normally take, it felt a bit systematic as the reads continued. Things that would repeat constantly on each story which in turn made them a bit boring and hard to complete.

But then this one come out, quite different from those before it yet still feeling yours.

Quite the steep up.

love it

Whee! A happy ending and it's so darn sweet! The feels reading this and your other NanoFate fics. You're amazing.

Goodness, I can't believe she doubts her feelings for her. How? Why? It must be really confusing for her to feel like this. Oh my!

That was a wonderful wonderful firsthaoter. You write beautifully and I love all the details you out into developing their characters.

Loooooooooooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeelyyyyy.

Everything you write is heart-wrenching and perfect.

Good story! I luv it. .

Dude this was really good. Like really really really good. Good grammar, good storyline, meaningful, and not OOC. absolutely freaking loved it.

nice

cool chapter

I've been looking for a good Nanoha/Fate fic, and I found a great one.

Also, after reading the reviews that were already here for this story, I think I'm the only one who caught the Zebes/Crateria reference. I cackled when I saw it.

Whoa is fate dense... but it was a great ending... and it took a nice slow pace that made everyone realize the real problems... i liked it A LOT! Glad nanoha is alwaso taking notice that Vivio is pushing herself too hard as well!