Reviews for Escalating Affections
xenon0619 chapter 15 . 1/7/2018
Man it's been over 5 years! it's too good be abandoned
Alixiron chapter 15 . 11/2/2015
When will you update ? It's 2015 and 3 years from your last update .
PRONTO3000 chapter 7 . 8/5/2015
Uh... I'm starting to wonder why this story has so much favorites/reviews. It basically got no depth to it.

...I'm leaving.
PRONTO3000 chapter 6 . 8/5/2015
Manliness! What a great example of masculinity.
PRONTO3000 chapter 5 . 8/5/2015
Creating a chapter in order to post an update/notice is against FF rules, y'know.

Can't really review anything.
PRONTO3000 chapter 4 . 8/5/2015
Seriously, frustratingly, unbelievably short. No other complaints really.
PRONTO3000 chapter 3 . 8/5/2015
Sweet. But too short.

Need longer chapters.
PRONTO3000 chapter 2 . 8/5/2015
Now this is nice. Character interactions are vital part of a story beginning, no matter how small.

You need a beta. Or at least beta the story yourself. Found a few typos.
PRONTO3000 chapter 1 . 8/5/2015
Ahh. Hinagiku and her stubbornness.

Looks promising.
KDKid2020 chapter 15 . 11/11/2014
Well I like the start... it was kind of great, Hinagiku found Hayate first rather than Nagi. I like how the story goes. The only thing that was quite shocking is that Nagi just threw away some 157 million yen to Hayate... Well that was easy, debt problems solved... I hope I can dismantle a deadly nursing robot and get away with 157 million yen.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/16/2014
Update please. its been 2 years
joseph flowers chapter 15 . 6/5/2014
P.s. I never thought of hayate without nagi until I read this and now I want this so bad!
joseph flowers chapter 15 . 6/5/2014
Yes my last name is flowers I really love your work its hard to found good fabric these days. I also know how hard it is to find time for writing because I have track And cross country meets and practices so I can't always write. Plus all the studying. So keep up the good work! One of the best fabrics I have read in a while. :)
Kawaii Otaku chapter 15 . 5/30/2014
Make more chapters faster,please?!
Christ chapter 15 . 2/1/2014
Sorry, I know you hate these, but I'm not getting an account.
Anyway.. Story Idea!
Wataru and Sakuya get locked somewhere and start talking about how Sakuya gave away her spot in school so he could join. As it goes on, romantic situation comes up. In the end they kiss, saki and Maria find and help them, no one knows about the kiss. Pretty terrible, right? Anyways, if you like the idea, give me a shout out during the next Arthur notes section, if you even read it. Thanks!
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