This story was great and I did like the progression of it though I feel like Ryo should have explained why he rejected Dee. Other than that this was a wonderful read.

good story

I loved it! Ryo and Dee dance around the sizzling attraction, but I like the idea of Ryo being forced to initiate some of this to show Dee what was going on.

Fabulous!

OMG! Aww, this was cute. I opened a new tab and listened to the song on youtube as I read this. I put it on again everytime it stopped, I put it on again. The song was really nice (Haha, I replayed it about 5 or 6 times and learned the song! XD) I loved this, it was so romantic and nice.

~Mia~*~Cruz~

You wrote very well in high school. I liked this! i would like to see a little more fleshing out of the epiphany Ryo has about how his rebuke hurt dee so much...but otherwise, very nice :D I don't think it warrents an "M" rating; you could post this under "T" and put it on the main page

CUTE!

Cheers,

ColeridgeFan

Ah, this was lovely!

I believe that is my rather overused compliment, so I shall hand you another one.

Terrific! Wow, I haven't said that for a while, now have I?

There may have been (and I mean there were when I say that) a few little typos or spelling errors, but I do not think anything really bothered me.

I love the whole idea of this story, and I swear, swear, swear I have read this exact same one at a previous time, on here, by you. Odd, eh? It was a dream. :).

Anyhoos, I really like how it was written. It wasn't necessarily a favorite writing style of mine, but it certainly captured my intense reading side.

I applaud you for a very wonderful ending. *claps*

I alerted you on my subscriptions because I do wish to see more of your writing in the future.