Good story so far but I'm having trouble finding out whose talking

Such a sweet, fluffy piece! Totally put a smile on my face

Fabulous. Would have never thought of them, but you made them work. Your AUs are simply amazing!

this was fantastic!

I loved this pairing and you did marvelous writting this!

:)

This is amazing!

Love it. Momo is so funny for being prone to accidents, but it fits her so well. And a non-angsty/super angry Ichigo is a good change of pace. They're great together and I love how are perfect together.

"Kurosaki Ichigo is not amused."

Unamused Ichigo,

Is unamused.

..W-what..?

I couldn't figure out who is talking or what is happening.

lol

I like the onomatopoeia in the beginning. Very clever. I like how you show emotions and what's happening. Overall, this was sweet and humorous. :-)

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Correction:

{And all three of them are quite to content to leave the matter behind them.} too content.

I like the references, especially the Lion King and Gollum ones. Good character interaction - it got me giggling. :D

And you're welcome.

Great story I always find this pairing to be rather cute so I'll love to see what you comeup with

Omg to funny.

You're not very good at humor? This chapter actually left a smile on my face and giggling, especially towards the end.

And you're welcome. :-)

Correction:

"He was supposed to one-in-a-million person that she would meet once, and never again." I believe be a should be between to and one.

The character interaction is comical and I love the exposition. Great imagery as always. Definitely worth continuing if you want to and when you have time. :-)

took a few tries to understand. interesting enough though

xD now that you've explained it to me, yeah its totally awesome! continue! well you kinda said there would be a chapter two, but i'll say it anyway! continue! yeah! lol ok that's enough from me, cyas!