This was a fun story. I really liked the relationship between Axel and Roxas. Axel makes a good cynic in love. Kairi was a fun confidante/tormenter, although I find it hard to believe Axel would forget his niece's name.

My God...this was an epic. I couldn't read this fic fast enough I was so hooked, and I usually shy away from first person. Yes there were no sexy times but I loved this to bits! Immaculately well written. Thanks heaps!

I liked this. If anything I say Roxas was kinda the stalker XD
I like the ending too. It made me laugh and think about how he probably forgot about his classes and what the heck Roxas family will say when they see Axel

I highly enjoyed this! Your writing skills are very good what with your use of descriptions, emotions and whatnot. Also, very few spelling mistakes, for which my inner grammar nazi thanks you.
I loved your spin on Axel as a professor with a habit of smoking - funny enough that is how I think he would be if he were a real person.
Even though you said it lacked "real lemon" I thought you put in just the right amount. Overall a sweet story with a lovely intake into love-at-first-sight, with two of my favourite characters from KH (so thanks for pairing them up).

This was great! :)

SOOO GOOD, i wish this was more of a story, not a one shot

really cute. thanks for sharing. i especially love how rox brings out axel's awkwardness. great job!

Ohmygod. What is this I don't even-

I HAVE NO WORDS FOR THIS. It's too amazing. I enjoyed every second of that, and my heart did a flippy on about six different occasions while reading it. That. Was. INCREDIBLE.

Pfffft favorited.

aw this was really cute :3

I absolutely adore this story and all it's witty humor.

Your writing really does do the characters justice if they were actually in an alternative universe. I loved how you portrayed Axel when he first entered the lecture room and Roxas' forward personality was refreshing to read.

I hope you write and upload more one-shots in the future.

(So please come back... T_T)

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! it's so cute. ohmyfuck. bawwwh. i dont even know what to say cause i'm bleeding awesome from reading this story. :D

Hahaa, I liked this one! Was it weird that my favorite character was Zexion? _ _

write a sequel or something for this one i haven't been so happy and sad to read a story that had only the one chapter! XD i loved the plot! soooooo! much! wants more 3

and what happens to kairi ...even though you cant respond to this because im to lazy to review on my account. I'll be looking for your other story's when they get completed and put up ! 3

"I was 12 when I wrote this," he said, "I wasn't equipped with all the wisdom of the world."

hahaha fave line in the entire thing. I lol'd.

I really suck at reviews but I just wanted to say that I enjoyed this story. It was interesting to picture Axel as a professor.