Might I say you two are fantastic and this fic and it's sequel are two of my favorite Tales of stories! Thanks for sharing. )

That's a pretty wretched way to end it!

But back to the fic in general. Besides this, there wasn't one chapter I didn't bust up laughing at. Marvelous collection you, really great. XD

If the story about Muse's trick-or-treating experiences really is true, I pity you so much.

Loved your chapters !

The end is so sad :'(

Great work !

All the stories were great !

Congrats !

Why...AH! I was so happy and laughing all the way through! SO SAD ENDING! NOOOOOOOOOOO!

Though I guess it was inevitable...but it made me so sad. But, it did give closure, kind of...Martel be with Kratos T0T

You know, I was just going to send my love for this whole story in one review at the end, but this one made me laugh so hard, I thought it earned one to itself!

Very much loved this chapter! I can even see Kratos being a worry-wart like that, too. Though he did have good points with a sleeping baby, I died when he went from the flu to an ulcer. That was great!

Oh man. This fic was beautiful, powerful, and at the end of it all, it was absolutely heart-wrenching. Good story. I'm adding this to my faves.

Very sweet and very entertaining, up until the last chapter, which was just that much sadder. Excellently written!

only on chapter eleven but loving it. Very funny.

Sorry, I don't feel like signing in today...

Anyway, poor Kratos! I don't think the "rules" have helped him, do you?

Alas! It had to end! Woe to the family. To write a Kranna story would probably be writing a tragidy (it has all the potential for a tragedy).

Thank goodness for the sequal.

You weren't kidding when you said you were going to make it depressing. It's definately not what I was thinking you were going to do for your final chapter, but I can't wait to see how your sequel turns out! Please post it soon?

*sniff*...woah, this one is really, really saddening...but I'm...happy you're going to make a sequel. But this chapter shook me up a bit...poor, poor Kratos...*bawl*

This was so sad...but I guess it makes a fitting end! I can't wait to see how the sequel turns out! If you were going to skip to an older Lloyd, I think this was a good way to do it too!

I'll be looking forward to the sequel!

Wow, you guys have such amzing writing skills. I'm really looking forward to your sequal! And chapter 20... It almost made me tear up. ALMOST. Great job, great job.

Love,

Doodlebugg

You're right, no comedy here... This was still a great chapter, possibly your best one yet. Poor Kratos, such a great story and I look forward to the sequel.