Im sorry but to me this story makes no sense. No one ever calls the police, christine never tells anyone she needs help when she has the chance, no social workers ever check on christine, shes a minor who isnt attending school, and she couldve said no to erik at the altar. It seems ridiculously unrealistic and like theyr being forced to be a couple for the sake of them being a couple, it just isn't believable. I like that you use leroux erik, but i feel like this fic could use an overhaul to be honest.

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Busted...

oh thank you thank you thank you for finally adding the epilogue! i love it!

i really worshiped this story over the summer, my sister and i would take turns just sitting by the computer waiting for an update. seriously. i am so grateful to you. this is truly wonderful. all of it.

You are definitely doing a better than average job with this story for a young person. And I have tried to avoid being critical until this chapter although numerous plot lines strained belief but I must comment on Christine in this chapter suspecting Erik to be weakened, ill, conceivably dying and rather than flying to his side we rejoin her a week later when the results of her audition are known. NOT believable.

Wow, that was stormy. lol But then again how could they ever be anything other than just that? Aww, I am sad that it is really over now. But it feels right. ;)

Oh, the end at last...it was a very interesting ending, and I liked it. :)

Hi, I've never reviewed before, but I just want to applaud your work! I read this all summer long and loved every minute of it, and really liked how you wrapped it up. Probably the most realistic way to make Erik and Christine end up together while keeping it true to the characters, and I definitely give you kudos for that! :D I can't wait to read your edits and the pending epilogue! Keep up the excellent work!

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I totally understand! School has been a problem with me updating my story too. Take your time so when you update you have something you feel good about :)

omg, i was getting so worried you forgot ! i got the update at school and drove home super fast! im glad school is going well for you :)

Take your time. I now how you feel with school. I am a senior in high school and between my orchestra rehearsals, handbell choir, year book and crazy homework it is almost impossible to write. Plus all the college stuff. My guidance counselor at school decided to tell me last week that I need to have everything to her by October 15th if I want to apply to my schools early... I take my SAT exams October 10th. So I am screwed lol...

Anyways, good luck with school. I hope that things settle into a routine soon. I know how crazy being a musician and all the other things are!

I will wait patiently for the epilogue and I am interested to see what changes you decide to make within the story.

Your talent and ability with details, and intricate writing is definitely worth the wait!

I cant believe it, Im very sad at how you ended it, but its your story. I was away and i read chapeters 27-31 as soon as i got home and i was so excited that Erik can Christine made such good progress and then Raoul ruined it! i was so mad that Erik didnt get she was being dragged away and not running! uhgg. lol. Anyway, i still loved the story and cant wait for the epilouge. But im not sure why you "cannot possibly continue this story any longer"? no judgement or meanness meant. still a devoted reader - Bellerach.

Life marches on. I was glad to see you end your story and not leave it to gather dust. When you have the time I shall read you epilogue. Thank you. One more, more please.

oh i'm so sad that it's all over now! It was a strange ending; strange but good. I kind of expected that she would end up with Raoul again, but got a surprise. Always a good thing.

Ah a good ending to the story. But I am very sad that it has to end so soon :( Please write and epilogue because it will fill in the gaps and really finalize the story.

That is a pretty good way to finish it off. An epilogue would be nice to finish it out and fill in a few little gaps. I will miss this story to be honest, but it has been a good one. ;)