Poor Itachi, it’s so sad what happened to him. I loved this story so much!

What a beautifully written fanfic. The pace and description allowed me to imagine all the things you wrote. Little Itachi is also such a tranquil child. Your writing is lovely!

I loved it. It was sweet and sad, and wonderfully written.

Awesome job, I loved every lyrical bit of it.

I cried. I swear I did. Ahh the art of deception ;)

So...emotional...it left me speechless...

Nice! :) I think its well written. I like how u described the crows and the murder.

That is one of the saddest, yet most amazing stories I've ever read.

Wow, that was really sad.

I really like the way you arrange your sentences.

And I have to wonder, is Sasuke the hawk?

Anyways, great work.

This is truly awesome...

I've never thought about Itachi in a way that would ever allow me to think of this, but it is very true and...eye-opening? I sound like such a rambler...(but I am!)

Anyways, great story, any others that you come up with I would be glad to read~!

wow this realli speaks to me of Itachi's personality it is deep very well written and done. it shows the depths of the Elder Uchiha!