Is what Chuck said about Tails not being the only one to raise somebody young a reference to the fact that if you did the math of Chuck and Nelson's age, Chuck only had Nelson at 12

Are you going to write more soon?

I loved it! I hope you soon continue this or I will be left on another cliffhanger! I rate this from 1-30 612.6! :)

Don't know if you're going to continue or not. But I hope you are because the story really interesting and the last chapter was really good. It was funny the character seemed like themselves and I can't wait for more.

well are you going to finish because i m looking forward to it

update?

Yeah! It's up! This is going awsome!

What happen next did Sonic and the gang warmed Chris about the Black Arms invasion ? Report back to me

Wow, I really loved this story! You really did a nice job solving all of the cliff hangers. I really hope you continue! This was one of the most wonderful storys i have read on this website! Keep up the great work!

A very nice and interesting story you have here. I like how you're mixing Shadow the Hedgehog and Sonic X and keeping it believable.

Damn, cliff-hanger! Now they'll be so distracted that Helen can't answer.

See you next chapter.

Ya gotta continue! I was up at 6:00 clock reading this.

i loved it cant wait to see how they react lol keep it the good work

WAHOO! THAT WAS AN AWESOMELY ACTION-PACKED CHAPTER! IT WAS AWESOME AND I CAN'T WAIT TIL THE NEXT CHAPTER! AND MERRY CHRISTMAS TO YOU FRIEND!

Wakai is very funny. I was really surprised that this was updated, but also very glad! Keep up the good work!

Hey! You updated! This story is coming together pretty well! Minor grammatical errors, otherwise nice. Could be made rather excellent if you add some more sensory detail, but not in the 'it looks like this with this, with this, and these and those'

Try to make the detail flow smoothly, Its pretty hard sometimes but I'm sure you can do it. ;)