What a great start.

I normally don't like fics written in present, but this one flows perfectly.

I know this is a really old fic now but I just read through this and it was really sweet, I loved it!
The way you wrote all this was so beautifully descriptive, I loved the metaphors you used for things for instance, just gah, so pretty uwu
And the way you built up the relationships between all of them, but especially Orihime and Ishida was done so well, it felt really organic and real :)

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words can not describe the utter beauty of this story, i never read isihime but this fic hjas converted me to this ship

this fic made me cry and laugh and it is pure awesome sauce

you are an incredible writer and i am off to read more of your writing

amazing! and so beautiful!

Haha! You said you wrote most of the chapter to sixth station - guess what song I was listning to before reading this chapter! XD anyway, this is a fab story, it's written so well and was a pleasure to read :)

Brilliant fanfic, here. I just think you did a lovely job with this. Keep up the lovely work!

This was a lovely story. Thank you for excellent grammar, spelling, and punctuation.

Loved it :3 so difficult to find good IshiHime fics that keep them IC and have a well written plot. Gj *A*

Interesting. So Aizen created the illusion of the crater, framing Ishida. Since Inoue never seen Aizen draw his sword, the illusion wouldn't work on her. And Gin was waiting for her to show up so that he can kill her so she can't relay what she'd seen...

Omg Go Inoue! Kick that Phoenix's ass! DX

Best chapter ever ;~; so genuine and tender and sweet and perfect *A* I hope they're happy in the end.

You did a pretty solid job with the plot too, I liked the ending.

wow, I have absolutely loved story, and I loved this chapter! great stuff, you've really done a fantastic job maneuvering through the emotions and building up to their kiss. And the best part is that it doesn't feel fake. The emotions and buildup progressed so smoothly and believably. I think you did a particularly good job with Ishida's emotions and his thought process, and also with Orihime's as well, particularly the little things, like when she feels angry towards Ichigo for not doing more to help Ishida at the beginning, or when she feels jealous of the way Ishida finds some measure of passion when trying to think of ways to help Rukia. I really feel like those smaller, not exactly vital to the storyline, emotional details really add a lot to the reading experience, it really allows the reader to identify more with the character and to understand them better. It makes them feel more real. Good job :)

Awe...beautiful. What an awesome story you have here. I love it. Going on my favorites list. Excellent job!

Awesome chapter. I didn't expect her to "reject" Aizen. Pretty sweet!

Evil? Oh my gosh, no! This was your best chapter yet! Absolutely loved it. You totally had me in suspense. Great job!