Hey I'm not leaving a review. But this story that I've linked below sounds too similar to your story except the names

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Really cool story! Enjoyed it very much :)

not bad, and I think Jenny's attitude and behaviour is ok, just normally it would be the other way round or more equally balanced. because in most other fics its Jenny that pushes the relationship. anyway good story, I'm reading the next chapter in three... two... one... reading it as i press the buttons. xD

Loved this story!

OMG I LOVED THE PINK PAINT PART! I was sitting in the living room reading this with my family watching football and my faced turned red almost purple trying to contain my laughter but i started laughing so hard i feel on the floor... I think my family thinks I'm crazy now... :P

Why are Tony nicknames for Mcgee slightly homophobic

I've loved reading the story so far, athough one thing has been irritating me to hell. You keep spelling Shepard with two p's, when it's only one. However it isn't exactly a major problem, I just thought I'd set the record straight. Clearly as this is th only thing I could find fault with, proves that your writing skills are second to none! I'm definitely going to enjoy the rest.

Enjoyed the entire story! Excellent writing, and seemed so authentic for both characters. Great job. Thanks so much for the entertainment!

Ok, it's like 1:30 am here in Holland and I'm sooooo tired but I HAD to read your story till the very end. I loveloveloved it.

Alright, I've read so far and enough. Don't get me wrong. I like th fix. I actually like it, which is a surprise since I hate fixs where jenny and Gibbs get kids.

My bef with you would be Lexie. She's far too mature. She's four, for crying out loud. She can't act like that. She has some childish mannerisms, but she acts and talks like she's seven at least. her sentences shouldn't be nearly as good as they are. She shouldn't know how to make cake. Kids at that age are far les mature than you give her credit for.

this is a great story ! i cant wait to finish it :)

This was a great story, I loved it. As I said in my review of Family Matters, you balanced out both angst and fluff and you write family fics brilliantly.

I usually don't read fics with Kate in them without Ziva but I found the characterisation of Kate enjoyable and just like on the show.

Laura xx.

nice, though I'd say the rating was more like M in some chapters.. but good. I liked Jenny and Kate together and ... well nice, as I said.

Just found your story. I'm loving it. I like the way you narrative the dialogue in language that the character would use. For example language that a child of five would use. Long chapters ate fine by me.

What a great story!

Good job! :-]