hmm hmm

Why don't they try going to Hawaii?
Or maybe Egypt?

I loved the story! I read it all in just under two days. The plot was great, the way you flipped the roles for jake and Edward was great, I loved it all! There were however, two things that bothered me a bit.. One is Bella kept emphasizing over and over and over and over again how weak wolves are compared to vamps. That's the only part that rubbed me the wrong way.. Yes a newborn vamp is stronger than a mature one and even stronger than a wolf.. But wolves, even in human form are far more durable than you made them seem. They can easily hold their own, they are slightly more vulnerable in human form, but Jake and the pack were designed to kill the worlds greatest predators, they deserve far more credit than they were given. And the next one is just a preference.. I wish you would have ended the volturie and allowed the Cullen's to govern the vampire world, while they are helpful, arp is still raw evil. Other than that I really enjoyed the story very much.. Thank you for writing it. :)

Loved it, loved the ending. The way you wrote the last few lines. This is an idea that I really love, the AU starting with that phone call scene. I've even written an un-posted one myself, but this is definatley one of the best ones. The longest, most well-thought-out for sure! I read a lot of fics, but I tend to be more of a lurker and don't review often, but I definately had to leave on for this. It's really under-appreciated based on the low number of reviews!

I have really enjoyed reading your story, especially these last two chapters. They are my favorite. Thanks for sharing :)

Omg so much power and emotion! Amazing! Simply amazing!

that was how it ended? none of it made sense to be completely honest.

Um...okay then.

Omg! This chapter was just amazing! Your storie is sooo amazing! I don't want it to end!

It took me 3 days to read it but i am so glad i did. This has to be the best Jacob/Bella story i have read. It had me laughing hysterically in parts and crying at the last chapter. Beautiful. please do a sequel or another story, you are such a brilliant writer. Maybe a Bella/Sam story? Just a suggestion.

I might have gotten a little lazy at the end of Ch. 32. (spoiler alert) There was going to be a short bit with Rosalie and Bella, where Bella explains: If Edward is around while Renesmee is growing up, then he will be like a second father to her, both in her eyes and his own. And that would preclude his ever becoming her lover. Vampires are not as maleable as werewolves; once Edward's feelings are set a certain way, they will never change. So Bella takes some rather drastic steps to give Edward and Renesmee a shot at future happiness.

Didn't feel like logging in, that's my user name if you wanna send a reply though.

This chapter upsets me. I'm team Jacob, don't get me wrong, but Bella treats Edward absolutely unfairly. Don't you think Jacob should have a say in this as well? He didn't even enter that part of the story. It's his kid too, and i'm sure as a person who know what imprinting's like, he would be absolutely against this. To make someone forget the bond so the mother can be selfish? Bella's selfish and I'm really confused by this whole chapter because of that. I like your story, but this just...doesn't seem right. At all.

Love the story..but you through me for a loop when you basically killed off Claire...is there gonna be a way that she makes it through? the pack has already suffered enough with their losses.

sorry I haven't commented before now.

I have just been plowing my way through enjoying it.

now I have to say noooo I just got to here & there is no more...so sad...really need to know what happened, how was the fight, have Bella & Jake tried for another baby maybe she could? what about Leah? what about Edward? so many questions...

I really liked the convo between bella and edward about nessie and the nature of the imprint. Good to see the packs merging before the big battle and I wonder if alice saw a future where ed doesn't die.

some big stuff is gonna go down...