Nice! Can't wait to read more!

Well, the story so far seems good :)

Both Nina and Ryu are already arguing like a married couple... don't know if that's good or bad, but it gives substance to the story... so for me, so far, so good.

a piece of advice; try to put separators between the end of the chapter and your author notes, just that.

waiting for next chapter.

oh, and now we get to see the bad guys, right? they seem pretty hard core! can't wait to read the next chapter! _

ah haha! how cute! i always did love the ninaXryu pairings, eh? lovely romance scenes *_* (goes all fangirl mode) uh... hehe _; nice chapter!

ah, hello! this seems like an interesting story so far :) a new evil is afoot? uh oh! well, dragon boy's on top of it, right? _; great chapter!

your off to a good start so far,

naughty naughty of princess Nina having sex before she's married. I wonder if Cray knows what they've been up to. Protective big brother personality that he has, I'm guessing no.