| Reviews for Breaking Point |
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   Tony Moonstone chapter 52 . 9/26 I really enjoyed this story. I was saddened by what happened to Harry at the beginning to the end with Percy. It was a very unique story for me. I am very happy that you wrote this. Its definitely one of my favorites. Thank you Take care and stay safe Keep writing and I'll continue reading! |
| Tony Moonstone chapter 48 . 9/26 I loved the wedding, and I'm very happy cause this is the only story I have ever read. That featured a pairing of Harry/Percy. Thanks for that. Keep writing and I'll continue reading! |
| Tony Moonstone chapter 42 . 9/25 Wow a bomb spell, that's new. It's good that even though Ron was bad throughout the story, he turned good in the end. Loving this story more and more. Keep writing and I'll continue reading! |
| Tony Moonstone chapter 29 . 9/25 Even though I disliked Fleur in book 4, I loved how many Fanfiction authors took a liking to her. Thanks for making her likeable now. Keep writing and I'll continue reading! |
| Tony Moonstone chapter 26 . 9/24 Mr. Malfoy and Snape building a snowman, who would have thought. I'm really enjoying this story. Keep writing and I'll continue reading! |
| Tony Moonstone chapter 8 . 9/24 Interesting twist. Most stories have Mr. Malfoy as the bad guy and Narcissa as the good one. This story has it vice versa. Very interesting. Can't wait for more Keep writing and I'll continue reading! |
| Tony Moonstone chapter 2 . 9/24 Poor Harry, The damage done to him made me wince and gasp. Would that happen to someone in real life, would they survive? Eagerly wanting to find out what happens to Harry next. Keep writing and I’ll continue reading! |
| HoneyBear84 chapter 52 . 4/6 Love it |
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/28/2017 You are a great writer. The end of this chapter had me in tears. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/22/2017 I'm sorry, I'd love to read more because the plot is actually really good and well-constructed, but the grammar is so bad I can't understand what's going on half the time. Please consider a beta, or at least read stuff over now that you're done writing. |
| StupidChinaBook chapter 52 . 7/1/2017 How about Harry betrayed by everybody but the most unlikely person? |
| NialeliKropf chapter 52 . 4/22/2017 Loved it! |
| Stasia Ravenclaw chapter 52 . 6/16/2016 Loved it ~Stasia |
| brynn.brigham chapter 52 . 11/11/2015 Amazing story! |
| Not Jeff chapter 1 . 9/5/2015 What do you mean, 'no helpful beta reviews'? Are you saying you WANT the story to be difficult to read, and virtually indecipherable in places? I'd gladly read the story if it were better written, I love a good evil Albus story, and have been looking everywhere for Harry/Percy, but it's not the most common ship. You may want to consider going over it with a beta, and working out the kinks, as people would enjoy the story quite a bit more. |
