I really liked this. In a... kind of disturbed way, I suppose. But it made sense, and I liked it. :)

Very interesting. And a refreshing fic, and portrayal of Axel and Roxas' dynamic within the Organization. Good stuff!

Brilliant. Absolutely fricken brilliant. That really all I can think to say. Wow. Just wow. Simply wonderful. I'm awestruck by this.

Your characterization for Axel and Roxas was dead on. The whole thing was well written, it was simple yet complex. I love that you wrote about the lesser nobodies as well as their relations to their corresponding superior. I like stories that have the lesser nobodies in them. There are so few most of the time they are just mentioned in passing and have nothing on their relations or nature, it‘s the same way for the Heartless. Well other than being the enemies of Sora and the rest of his side. Lesser nobodies and Heartless don’t get enough love.

~conkreen

I remember reading this on LJ, or somewhere similar before, and being awestruck by it. I'm not sure if I left a comment then, so here I am again :D This is amazing, amazing work here. The Samurai nobodies VS. the Assassin nobodies is such an interesting one to observe, and one that I haven't seen explored elsewhere before.

I really like the idea of the pack mentality, and how it reflects the way Axel fights and thinks. Like the survival of the fittest, or how Axel's loyalties are so fragile, and shifting, that in Castle of Oblivion he did not hesitate to betray everyone in the castle.

Ah, and aren't you the same author who wrote "Children Shouldn't" in the -man fandom? Man, your works are extremely interesting, I really can't help but adore the style you use :D