this. is. so. FRICKING AMAZING!

Part 2?

Why must this come to an end? If you ever come back to this story, you are going to do the Puck-eats-Snow-White's-apple scene, right? YOU HAVE TO!

Hehe. A kicked 'pucky'.
I wonder why he didn't think of when Daphne told Veronica that Sabrina was married in the future.

They're so sweet and awesome! I can't even!

Stop saying your stories suck! They are amazing. My only disappointments are when you don't write ENOUGH. Like the night they had to sleep on the trampoline. Is that the next chapter?

This chapter's SO gorgeous! I liked the reference to 'Flip' and the running joke 'why do I smell roses?'. So funny.

Hahaha. Does the cocoon by any chance choose the most annoying scent to spray on the protector so they never forget their duty? And you also answered some questions which I yelled at you for in the last chapter, so thanks! :)

Aw, damn. I was hoping Puck would have some (dim) memories of when Sabrina was nursing him or could hear her when he was in the cocoon or something. Also who Sabrina's cocoon sprayed and followed around, and why didn't it take as long as Puck's did?! A lot of really bothersome questions which it is probably not fair to expect you to answer, but they're bothersome.

Wow. Emotional rollercoaster for this chapter. Funny and sweet and really terrifying at the end. You are a talented writer! I found your take on Puck's reaction to the sucker punch interesting. Given that she sucker punched him for kissing her, and his later behaviour, I always thought he would have been devastated. He might have realised she was in denial later though.

Rawr!

This is really good. Seriously good.
I love how you came up with a logical reason for the mustache. That makes so much sense!
On to the next chapter!

Well, I for one think you've captured Puck's point of view just about perfectly. ;)

WTF! Where is Chapter 10 and so forth?!

I totally agree with you that the 8th book was terrible but you still managed to do awesome on this