Great story I really liked it good job writing the story.

I love the ending, its to bad Ino and Sai don't have kids.

you need to check you writing, you said hinatas name instead of ino on the bottom

You need to work on your grammar. A lot of the words you are using are wrong or used in the wrong pretense so maybe next time you write a fic you should make sure you are using the right words in the right ways so as to not confuse people or make it painful to read.

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good chap

Guess you messed up and typed 'Hinata' instead of Ino there, thanks, now _that_ image isn't going to be out of my head for a while! Good story though, you might want to fix the grammar and spelling though.

nice story

it was funny n super steamy to

in this last chapter the lemon got me confused a bit;

E.g u wrote he took off her pants,when she came in a short skirt then reverted back to the skirt and again when you said he took of her panties along with her skirt/pants then some time after took them off with his teeth.

I think u may wanna check that,i cud always be wrong.

Otherwise nice story

oh my

hinata evil grin DISASTER! I luv it D

Haha funny! :D I enjoyed reading it:)

Awesome story I love these real world fanfictions, but they tend to be badly written. Your fic had a great plot and the naughty bits were very hot.

I hope you don't take this the wrong way, especially since your such a dedicated reviewer, but your grammar needs some polishing. I noticed that in certain parts you missed some quote marks (") and that you rarely, if never, used commas. While many people will flame and be quite mean if you dont use proper grammar, this isnt a site for professional authours - it's for learning ones.

So, don't take what I say badly I would like to help! PM me if you would like some pointers or need a beta reader for any of your stories!

lol you know what would have benn really hialarous? if siay and takashi started yelling at eachother siay calling takashi a teme and takashi calling siay a dobe. i was looking for that, but it didint happen DX. great story though!

Oh my Neji and Tenten steaming up the locker room XD

good ending funny the kids were good to enjoyed reading it

Ah, kids...A nice ending!...R u sure it's not "Saya"? There's no "si" in the Japanese alphabet...Oh well. Alls well that ends well!