| Reviews for Bella's Lullaby |
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Litany Gone chapter 9 . 7/12/2010 Thanks |
edwardbabymomma chapter 9 . 7/11/2010 I hate Jacob but I'm hoping he is not some perverted creep. Great Chapter |
edwardbabymomma chapter 8 . 7/6/2010 Awesome chapter! |
Bammers chapter 8 . 7/5/2010 Loved it very much thanks for sharing and He can have anything I own LMAO update when you can thanks... |
Litany Gone chapter 8 . 7/5/2010 Thanks |
nullaccount78 chapter 7 . 4/26/2010 AHMAZING story the idea is fresh and creative i luv it continue please |
glasses-girl1992 chapter 5 . 10/22/2009 Hi. Your story is really good, very creative. I like the idea and you have potential. I don't want to be rude, and really you don't have to listen to me, but I think you should write more simply. It's like you trying to have a style that isn't yours. If you just wrote normally, it would be easier to read. Even though the story takes place in the past, I'm not sure they talked that way, so just write like you normally do. You might say that I know nothing about this, but writing is a big hobby of mine, so I just want to tell you what I think. But seriously, other than that, don't stop, it's great! :) |
brittany86 chapter 7 . 9/6/2009 love this can't wait for more chapters |
Litany Gone chapter 7 . 8/28/2009 thanks for this update |
Litany Gone chapter 6 . 8/27/2009 I don't know what edward was thinking but it was not realy nice, and btw now bella know he has a little girl and peraps a wife somwhere. Realy good chapter, i hope to see more soon |
Litany Gone chapter 4 . 8/27/2009 realy good I like where you go |
Litany Gone chapter 3 . 8/27/2009 great idea for a story |
twinkletoes chapter 6 . 8/24/2009 update soon please! i want to know more! |
cheza90 chapter 7 . 8/3/2009 come back soon! lol :( |
edwardbabymomma chapter 7 . 8/3/2009 Have Fun! |