Please follow through with your sequel! It is going to be so epic I can't wait!

I know its been AGES since you wrote this, but I would really love it if you continued it! Please?!

Very intense.I liked it! Go to favorites! *3*

Aw! Yay for Aoi and Kyouichi getting their well deserved happy ending!

Awesome story love Aoi and Kyouichi

The ending was just amazing. :) Nice story. I always thought Kyouichi secretly did have feelings for Aoi, but he was just not the type to show it.

Hi,

I just watched a lot of the Tokyo majin episodes and I also Love the AoixKyouichi pairing! So of course I've read all of your work!

If you know what episode that Aoi falls off the roof I would be greatful - you made me want to watch it! Keep writing, I want to read more about this awesome couple!

Great work! I LOVE IT! I adore this couple!

Uwa~ Not enough fics for these two! Woah I want more...you rock!

LOVE IT! i swear i was so into this ship from the 1st few episodes. this was such a good story plz write more :D

While I disagree with you on the dubbing cast (gag o_O), I have to say, you write very well. There were only minor grammatical errors, and overall I enjoyed your style and pacing. Adding the brief character insight into those anime scenes was nicely done; you have a good grasp on Kyouichi as a "person"!

However, the third chapter seemed totally out of place to me. It's generally not a good idea to switch POVs within the same story, and it just didn't mesh; it felt like an entirely different fic. The last installment also felt rushed, which took away from the romance. And I have to say, the sex scene wasn't anything special. Being a goody-goody virgin, I think Aoi would've been more shy and scared, and not just in regards to her scar (which I think needed better dialogue). I did like the letter-writing, that was sweet and very Aoi.

Thanks for sharing your work, though! I hope you return to writing for Tokyo Majin someday soon. (_~)

i want you to do the third season it would be cool and i love this couple

I love your story! FINALLY! something other than the yaoi favorite! I like that paring, too, but still...

Though, there's just ONE problem...

because of chapter 3, you might want to move it to the M (mature) section rather than keep it at the T (teen) section. Just becaus of the explicitness of lemons. Just incase goes apeshit on you. Other than that, I'm looking forward more of this paring

-PLS-

I would go over it. Minor grammatical and spelling errors were made a long the way. This was very interesting. I loved it. I would've loved to see more of Kyouichi's personality though, he wasn't as in character in this story as he usually is in your others. I could totally see Aoi taking time to write letters to Kyouichi even if she never sent them.

this was a cute fic. Thanks for the update!

It was awesome! I also totally approve of a epic third season-ish sequel!You must write that story so i can read it and feel all of the aoi/kyouichi love drama!Oh and please update TSA.