Completely irredeemable and totally unlikeable characters. I hope this is an over-dramatized work of fiction and you don't/didn't know people like this in high school. I also hope you don't think this is normal behavior. I completely understand the need for unlikeable characters in a story, but you had not one single character with any redeeming qualities. I couldn't care about any of them and didn't finish this awful story. And where do Alice & Rose get off lecturing Edward, when they behave the same way? Awful. Just awful.

I loved it, I enjoyed all of the chapters, and I liked how you did and wrote everything! I will be reading the next part of this story but it had me hooked through every chapter and with every word! I know I didn't review after every chapter because I was so hooked onto the story and didn't want to stop reading! This is a really great story, and I can't wait to read the rest of it. So don't stop writing either, because I would be sad if you did because you are a really good writer!

need more

:)

Please don't mark the story complete if it's not!

Where can I find the completed story?
Shay

Immature trash!

Proud of Bella for standing up to her dad!

Well, Edward was a jerk, but I don't think he'd do that.

I sent you a PM yesterday . If you would like a beta let me know. I think it could help your review count.

There are so many things that I find hard to believe with this story. It's too much all at once. Too big. Too much drama, too many people with drama. It's like a bad D list day time drama.

It has potential, but there is no character or plot development.

~Z~

He's doing well. But he does need to be entirely truthful.

Now is e time to come clean...

Good chapter.

Good but difficult chapter.

It is hard to read this story. The moral code of most of the characters is lacking or simply corrupted. They are toxic in their personalities. Having written that, I also find the story strangely compelling. And I am so pleased I don't know anybody who behaves in this manner...I hope...I think...