This is really funny! The sheer ridiculousness of it all...

This story is funny. The only constructive criticism I can provide for it is that the formatting needs to be cleared up a bit. Clear scene breaks, separation between author's notes and the story, etc.

As for ideas, recall my review from Chapter one? I've got an idea based on that one, a playdate between Sheridan's kids and Bester's kids.

Didn't read the story yet, but when I saw the crossover the first thing I pictured was Bester with a dozen kids all going for a trip to Babylon 5.

Sheer silliness is great! Oh, this was funny, very very funny! Loved it! Please do continue this. So, my ideas for babysitters - well, it goes without saying that G'Kar and Londo together would be a hoot! And the aides - Vir, Lennier and Na'Toth (S1 incarnation, not S2's Barbie doll attempt!) How about Brother Theo and his monks? I can just see Theo staying calm...and doing a lot of praying! Erm...Ivanova and Garibaldi? *snorts* Hell, anyone! :D

this is a very funny story so far

you should have him ask ivonava garibaldie zack lennier and deleen to babysit in shifs or all together

or you can have shariden ask ivonava and then ivonava askes the people above

you could also put it so the babysitters are scared for life

you should update soon this is one of my favorite story

thanks