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Dear lawd I squealed so freaking loud. I think I made an lolplz face. Not sure though...

A really good story! Well written, the beginning made me really curious, good humour, I really liked the interaction between McCoy and Uhura.

It was a bit weird with the name Bones McCoy though, it seems to me like it should be just Bones or Leonard McCoy. And it was a bit stereotypical to kill the redshirt. The moment he joined the away team I thought "he's gonna die"...

Ahahaha poor Bones is scarred for life!

YAY! Everyone's alright!

Awesome story!

I totally enjoyed this story. I would have liked it better with out Kirk going alittle crazy on the Mayor. Well I mean the way that part played out. But, I do love the possessive factor you know Kirk seeing red. Anyways, good story.

_ this made me smile and bones made me laugh at the end!XD

I really liked this and would welcome a sequel in which Spock believes Jim's feelings are a result of their traumatic experience and thus Kirk must convinve him otherwise, sprinkled with the blossoming relationship between Uhura and Bones as well, of course, :)

I absolutely loved this. At the beginning, when you were switching between different timelines, it was actually very clear and there was no confusion. Your writing style is very crisp, and though I'd have liked to find out what'd happened to the Klingons, it isn't that necessary. Your ending was nice, and I'm glad I read this D

hahahah soo perfect i loved it great job i cant stop laughing it was hilarious lol

Awesome story, well-told.

Is it too much to hope for the last 1-2 chapters to still be written, so that we may learn the master plan? You last updated in July...

So Kirk is definitely more aware of Spock these days, eh? I hope that after this mission they actually figure things out and do something about it. It's going to be interesting to see what happens now though, with the four of them on the Klingon ship and the senator there...can't wait to read more! Keep up the great work.

Thus far I really love how you've created the characters and I really like your description. I was actually freaking out when they got attacked. I was like "No! It's a trap! Run away! Wait, save Bones and Uhura! Dammit!" lol. But yes, very great story thus far. Keep it up

So I definitely read through these first three chapters so quickly that I didn't give myself time to review so I'm going back to do that now (you know, to pressure you into continuing the story for my enjoyment :P). I'm so glad that Spock came for Jim and they're already starting to build their friendship. I hope they can save Bones and Uhura!

I really love badass Uhura in this, and McCoy is still spot on. Is it wrong that I laughed a bit when Ramirez died? It's just I wondered if he was doomed as soon as his red shirt was mentioned.

so i was reading, and getting into it..

then i go to see the next chapter (thinking for some reason there would be another one) but there wasnt, and now i really want to know whats going on! hahaah

good job, i really cant wait for the next chapter!