This is a really good one-shot! I like the use of the flashback and its relevance to the story!

Keep up the awesome work!

(And to the review below me...Wtf?)

u must have some weird-lookin top raman in order for those shoe laces to eat there eyeballs in that way. u shood go talk to the mystical pepper fairy about dat problem. she can help u find da hammer. when you got da hammer go to da corn stalk at da end of da road. den ask da corn stalk to give u da leaves. when u got da leaves go to da tissue box and knock 3 times. den throw da box in da donut pile. da donut pile is in da garage. now u go to da woods and get da frying pan. with da frying pan in ur hand u must hit da stop sign until it drops da leaves. when u got da leaves put dem in da pan and throw it to da cat lizard. chase da cat lizard until u get to da park. den u r done. if u don't do all dis den ur bread will go stale and u will have to eat cereal until da pepper fairy gives u another chance.

gl hf

~stalker in ur closet

this was good for your first resident evil fanfic keep up the good work

Always nice to see some LeonxAshley. This one is so sad though! Love to see Ashley taking charge (with the gun), and getting a kiss. You could probably combine some sentences here and there to have a little more variation in paragraph length-they're all pretty short (which is definitely better than all too long). The best way to improve is to write more! And it has to be LeonxAshley, or you won't get any better. LOL Kidding, write whatever you want. Oh, and I really liked the title of this one.

That was cool! Good job for your first RE story. I actually finished Resident Evil 4 the day before I left. Write another one

(to lazy to log in) do you think I could continue this story? oh and if you ever heard of family guy and invader zim come check out my stories i'v got an invader zim family guy crossover and its funny as hell so if you decide to read it leave an awnser about my question of continuing your story in your comments...please?

Damn you Salazar! You killed Leon! What a jerk. A bit sad if you asked me. Clever idea though. I really liked how you wrote the little flashback. Ashley actually killed the chainsaw? Wow. I also see theres some romance between these two or maybe its just the heat of the moment type deal. Anyway, it was really good. Loved it! Keep up the awesome work! )

awesome story... EVIL CLIFFHANGER! this could go on to be a great story to bad its only a one-shot though

Poor Leon! And go Ashley! Though I'm a Leon/Ada person, I did like how you presented Leon/Ashley. For the alternate scene where Leon dies on the spikes, I thought you kept Salazar and Ashley in character very well. My only criticism would be to flesh it out more-add details. But you've already noted that!

That was sad. Iv'e never been a big fan of leonXashley im more of a leonXada kinda person. But I like this story its really good