Rather poetic. It's a bit creepy... but in a good way, nevertheless.

That last sentence has more meaning than one, I think. A pretty interesting idea though, about the rain not even being real. I like your take on Demyx. :)

:O Wow. I really enjoyed this Demyx story. And yeah, I agree with OneThousandConfessions; it IS hard to find a Demyx story without being paired with Axel or Zexion. Either way, this was great.

Interesting insight into Demyx, especially since he didn't do much in KHII. I enjoyed reading this; it's hard to find a good Demyx-centric without him being paired with Axel or Zexion. I hope to see more from you in the future.