That is so true. Just as I pictured it. This was beautiful. Good job :')

this was really beautiful and very sweet. i could feel the emotion and sensation of their love, even though it is suposedly inconceivible.

Cheesy, but in a good way. Simple, but effective. better than a lot I read (I'm kinda picky)Well written and overall pretty good!

This is amazing.

wow. this was so beautifully written! keep up the good work!

Then he loves his son, Harry to bits and pieces and he dies trying to protect his family.