Love the story, just one question is Melody a Wheeler or is her name Sparks, just curious.

Umm great chap please update soon

i love it ! can't wait for more!

very interesting...why would Akizsa want to go save Jace?

i wonder...

up date soon please!

You really should hook them up I think it would be soooooooooooooooooooo cute! :D

This was a great chapter! I can't until you update again. :-)

Awesome can't wait for the nxt chap. I'm dying of curiosity here

so far... as I have read the story I find it kind of interesting ,

just wondering though is this a YuseixOc fic?O.O

anyways other than that its nice...

TC

:D

I definitely like this story! The characters are relatively IC (well they had to change a little with Mel involved, but still, it's good) and the plot is sorta AU without being . . . AU.

So kudos on that.

I do have a question though - Are Jace and Mel gonna get together? Or are Yusei and Mel gonna get together? Or hell, even Mel and one of the other men in her life? Just curious.

Please update soon!

awesome plz write more i luuuuv it

Cool~! Update soon~!

O_O... was that shadow magic? (the black mist)

i think it was... i wonder... hmmmmm.

up date soon please!

I'm glad you updated. It was a good chapter even if was shorter than some of the other chapters. I can't wait to see what happens next! :-)

its cool it gives a taste of whats to come. up date soon please!

Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next! :-)