This is so perfect and I absolutely love your Spock. A walking contradiction who is both wise beyond his years and also childlike all at the same time. Well done, you are a fantastic writer. X

Oooh! This was really good! Please tell me you haven't abandoned the story?

No need to feel insecure about your Spock! I thought he was wonderful, and I hope this gets continued even though it's been years.

It is a shame you quit after two chapters. This was lovely. Thank you.

Holy WOW that was amazing. Seriously, I almost cried right there at the end. Got all misty-eyed. *sniff*
Thank you for writing!
- Clara Brighet

Your Spock is awesome. Love it!

This is great. I think you did just fine with Spock. You used the curiosity angle for Spock right. I'm not one to talk though since I'm pretty new to the fandom and Star Trek in general. Looking forward to Uhura! And I think you got McCoy's voice very well. Looking back, I realize that you changed your writing style too, to better reflect Spock's mind and way of thinking and speaking. It's not as obvious as McCoy's but it's there. A fine attempt.

So I'm incredibly late to the party, but still wanted to say that I loved your Spock and your McCoy and your Jim! Maybe someday I'll get to read your Uhura :)

Loved these two chapters...how's chapter 3 coming? Hint, hint. Love the myriad depths of one Jim Kirk!

I love that Spock got him a book. This story is amazing. :)

update soon

I think you write a lovely Spock. And, you have to know, you're not horrible so long as the word o.k. never leaves his mouth. Thanks for the lovely story!

This story is incredible. I think your Spock is spot on. Continue the good work and update soon!

That is by far the nicest thing Spock could do for Jim...
He really doesnt have anything though does he?

I love it when Jim has had such a past that he can self-diagnose,
i know that's a bad thing but i love it...