Very well written. Creepy and spine tingling. I loved it!

Ok now thats a well written story!

This was an excellent, well written story and I really enjoyed it.

This is a well written story, and I'm looking forward to finding out what happens next.

The story has a great start, and it will be an interesting mystery.

I'm liking it so far. Gotta break off here, will review the rest later.

Jazzola :)

Interesting "plot bunny" you had in this story, LOV. I'm going to read your other Scooby stories now. I'll enjoy them as well. I liked this chap. too. Interesting characters. In one chap. I didn't like Phillipe's tone. Forgot to mention that in one of the reviews.

Daph sounds like Fred in this story, so very funny, LOV. You did make 1 little spelling error again: anybodies should be anybody's. Thought I'd point it out. Like I mentioned via e - mail I am picky about grammar but good at it. I'll review again in chap. 15.

Still liking this story, LOV. Saw in one sentence you had I think correct word should be "hung" instead of "snug". I think "hung" would make better sense if you ask me. I know this isn't a bad review, but I'm just helping out a bit. I'll leave a second review when finished with the story.

Wow... this story is creepy, LOV! Especially with the woman at the piano saying "Help me, help me!" I think that's creepy! But this is a good story.

Hmm, "Mrs. Rogers"; sounds like Shaggy and Velma are married in addition to Fred and Daphne being married, I like it. Keep writing stories like this, you've definitely got a fan.

This was a wonderful stroy. So much detail about everything. A great joy to read.

That was an amazing chapter, and story. I hope there will be a continuation? Or at least some more stories to come, because I will be happily waiting.

Keep up the great writing.

Great Chapter!

Keep up the AMAZING writing and update soon!

Poh. Wow. Whew. With a strange combination of a sleepless night, my PSP with the handy function of internet, my class room in the near of teacher's room, the luck of having only teachers who don't seem to mind their students only looking at a point under the table today and the luck, that the teacher didn't bothered to give the wireless-LAN from teacher's room a password, I managed to read your story. Yay.

I really like it. The characters are well planned and through the whole story, you get this urge to read farther. I really hope that you'll write more, cause it's good!

Thanks for this story,

Pia