Aw! I absolutely love how berserk Daine and Numair get when they think the other is in trouble or dead. My favorite scenes. Good job! On to the next. Until next time...

This was s great version of the book! It was so nice to read some of the gaps from Numiar's point of view.

This is... really, really good. As in, I would expect something of this quality to actually be published. This is probably the best and most well-written fanfiction I have read in... years, probably.
What book were you reading, by the way? You know, with the voodoo doll?

Oh, Numair...!

:)
I had fun imagining Alanna when that message of Numair's "execution" came through...

Yay badger – poor Numair.

Smirks.
Great chapter. And I wondered if the problem would be the link between real man and simulacrum...

Pack... Awwwwww!
By the way, Sir David as Lindhall..? Awesome!

I have to wonder who of their friends realised they were developing feelings for each other before they did...?
Clueless Numair is funny... And the other stuff makes me wanna give him a hug!

I've read all three of these stories in the past day and a half and I just really love them! This one especially, because I have always wondered what happened with Numair once Daine was taken. I think you captured his terror and breakdown perfectly. And I really love how Lindhall just KNOWS that Numair is totally in love with Daine even while he insists that they're just friends, a friend who's the most important part of his life and who he's willing to tear apart empires for, but no just friends. Poor delusional Numair.
It's past 1am but I really really want to start the fourth one now, I can't wait to see what you do with that one!

Numair is still in denail :D And Daine's even more so. Well, she's still very young so she has an excuse.

Poor Alanna, being seasick :D

There were so many moments that weren't in the books so it was a real pleasure to read Numair's pov. Thank you!

"I swear, I didn't do anything to the palace." - lol, he was like a little boy telling on his friend :)))

Lindhall wanted to tell Numair about his real feelings for Daine but he thought it was better for Numair to realize that on his own.

The reunion was very emotional, I maybe cried a little and maybe my husband laughed seeing me crying again listening (I'm using naturalreader) to my fanfiction (he's used to :D). Great chapter!

At least now Numair is not that afraid for Daine. Well, he still doesn't know what's going on but he has hope after his talk with the badger.

Poor Numair, he was in so much pain! And he really was going mad. He was lucky that Daine awoke and he was able to trust Lindhall and go to sleep.

How do you imagine Numair? I was think of Fardeen Ibrahim or Sendhil Ramamurthy...And as for Daine, Natalie Portman in Your Highness (well, a lot younger and with blue grayish eyes). Not them exactly but they are close to what I have in mind.

I loved this chapter a lot!