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Nice. Better than most I've seen 8.5/10.

muy bueno realmente bueno que desgracia que no es tu activo el bmw m3 pero todo lo demás quedo bien me gusta

This is a properly good Fan Fic, one of the best I've ever read. Personally I think NFSMW is the greatest game ever made and this just makes it sound even better. The characters involved, the intense races and the extraordinary pursuit at the end, genius, just genius.
I especially like the continued display of close friendship between the protagonist and Rog and also the fresh, new partnership between the protagonist and John. There's a few spelling errors here and there, but in fairness there aren't that many and it doesn't affect the story really, but it's just as a heads up.
Otherwise a really good story, very well written. Perfect balance of full-on action and simple, yet effective storyline. Excellent to read. Well done sir :)

dude this story was really well written! the characters seemed very believable and it all just makes the original Most Wanted seem so childish. plus i'm a huuuge 300zx fan so that made me love this story even more. keep up the good work, bro.

Nice.. Haha,

This is very good although the sentences at the start were sort of short but I like the part when the 300XZ came in and that part.. HAHA reminds me of the part in Wangan midnight Maximum Tune!

John reminds me of Jun Kitami when the I make a beast part comes in.. The part where the player tested the car just before reminds me of how Dom Toretto describe the 900hp Charger in F&F

The next part where he entered the race location is so opposite of what F&F is like.

And when the race came.. Hun reminded me of Dom big time.. First with the RED Mitsubitshi, the same as Dom's RED RX-7.. Thats nice.

This is one of the best stories I've read though. HAHA!

Thank you for making a story relating to the ONLY good, (along with Underground 2) NFS game EA has made so far.

And for everyone out there, keep in mind that NFS: Pro Street and the new one, are intended to go up against Gran Turismo.

wow. I'm honestly amazed by this story. if you were to give this to EA Games, they could probably make the official sequel to Most Wanted because Carbon is more like the pre-quel to the most wanted story.

Nice work with this, really enjoyed reading it, esp since I loved playing Most Wanted :-)